A beat i made

[blokB]

i hope i do this right. first drop in this thread. not sure how to upload. lemme know what u think. i tried to stay mellow with an abstract feel. felt good to me. lyrics ride well. just need a mic. lol

[IntrinsicCadence]

It's okay. The drum pattern can carry a flow well, but the string loop is too repetitive and short for my liking, making the beat somewhat boring. To me this sounds like the good beginnings of a solid beats, but I think it could definitely be improved with some extra effort. Bring in a few more change ups in the instrumentation and bring in a couple more layers of sound, and this could be solid.

[blokB]

good lookin bro. thanx for listenin.

[Alvin]

Um... its rather simple, maybe another layer would be cool? If I'm not wrong, correct me if I am, drums are a loop in Dr. Rex right? ok, I'm on verse two, and more layer came, not what i was expecting, but nice i guess. A little too slow with the plucked guitar to the faster drums. Its an ok beat, but I'm rather sure Dr. Rex is to blame.

[TheNobleOne]

the vibe to it was pretty cool. guitar was alright. i think when the hook came in those sounds were a bit corny. other then that whatever the other guys said is prolly more helpful then what i can offer. just keep doin ya thing man.

[blokB]

ya its a rex sample with a few simple chops in it. evertime i tried to change it i lost my flow and needless to say when frustration took over i walked away. cut myself short i guess. i dont know if i get pissed at reason or my mind but either way i need to learn to step back and look at it from the outside. thanx for listening.