Spoken Piano
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Spoken Piano
Well, this is a beat I'm currently working on, its for a mixture of Spoken word and Hip Hop. Im still thinking drums, but I wanted to post this up and bring some life to this section of the forum. I.C. <--- if i could spell your name off the top, i would, but your the driver of this band wagon, you can't stop now lol. Anyways, here it is...
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Re: Spoken Piano
Damn! This is awesome! The piano really brings some emotion, and when the drums strike I could see some really powerful shit being flowed along with it. I appreciate that u leave ample space for some spoken word verses, cuz I think this is the kinda emotional beat that'd match up with an emotional spoken word piece real well. U written anything up with this one yet or have any particular plans outlined for it already? If not, I'd be down with doing some sort of collaboration with it. Think this'd be a real fun beat to try to make something with...
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Re: Spoken Piano
Fur Sure IC, lets do it up... I dont really have a type of topic or anything, I just got tired of trying to find spoke beats on soundclick, and decided to make my own, this is the first one. Shoot me a topic and lets get down man, I always have time for Music, unless my wife burns my studio down, then ill have to run to the library so it may take me longer lol.
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Re: Spoken Piano
i can dig it. definitely dont see it as being on some hip hop shit but a nice poetry piece. i think it can use some drums too, i think that would set it off. not bad though man, piano was nice. keep doin ya thing.
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I appreciate it N1, and I'm experimenting with some drums, but they are not my strong suite lol.
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Re: Spoken Piano
yeah get a good spoken piece of emotion and feeling would rock this shit, but yeah it does depend on if you can get some good drum rhythm going and i may be able to jump on this aswell so we could all rock some shit dudes keep this good shit comin man
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Re: Spoken Piano
hell yeah, we should deffinatly stop this pretending ish, and just start collaborating everywhere lol. Thanks for the feed Mutual
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Re: Spoken Piano
Let's do it. AMH, this is ur beat so maybe u can pick a theme to lead the way with this collab. As long as it's something emotional, like dealing with death or somethin else that could have some powerful lyrics along with it.
Re: Spoken Piano
Yo this is clean. I love dropping spoken words to shit like this.
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Re: Spoken Piano
IC, mutual, illaborate, y'all wana collab? Verse a piece? IC, let me sleep on the topic and ill PM u the best I got.
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Re: Spoken Piano
im down for a collab on this, im diggin this beat and really want to do some spoken word
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Aight man, PM me ur email, so I can send u the beat. So far its just you, me and cadence.
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