Freestyle
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- TheNobleOne
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Re: Freestyle
its funny how some dummies walk around talkin bout their golden days
i battle my inner demons, one the mic is where i show my rage
i got flow like the ocean waves, im a beast at killin beats
and i mean lyrically and psychically i would literally kill you geeks
sittin at home all day playin WOW, Noble dont play around
most of yall quiet as a mouse, i barely hear you make a sound
all i hear is the chatter comin from ya keyboard, i ignore that
when its time to shine on the mic yall are dusty like floor mats
nobody really wants a war cuz they arent confident in their skill
if you wanna put ya money where ya mouth is ill have you coughin up bills
you see about three years ago i bought my first mic and mic stand
i did it all on my own homie, i didnt need a fuckin hype man
i use to be about text battles, text ciphers, text crews and all that
until one day i finally wanted people to hear my raw raps
so i started writin to beats, i was droppin tracks like every week
got some positive feedback, i found out i was actually nice with the speech
so i met mister J and he said he could hook me up with beats and production
just as long as all my songs werent about killin and cussin
so i busted a couple of tracks out, he put me on his CD
had a few thousand downloads now i know everybody can hear me
i had mad people hittin me up like "Noble you want to hop on this track"
and i never turned anybody down or charged them because i got it like that
i just wanted some respect from these vets and bet that i deserved it
everybody was yellin, tellin me how i was sick with the verses
met a dude from chi town on line and he told me i was dope
so we did some tracks and kicked some raps and he invited me to do a show
i flew out there and rocked the crowd, your damn right i was proud
so fast forward to today this rap shit is what im about
i been in a few crews also slaughtered a few along the way
and all this is what made me so strong today
even though life is getting out of hand right now i wont put the mic down
im still workin on my solo mixtape and got a few other in the works
still elevating my skill, i know i can get better at it
but still thats better then some cuz some never had it
so how dare you say you contribute more to the movement
if you aint never voiced your opinion on the mic then you aint proved shit
hiphop isnt about always typin ya shit and cryin on line like a bitch
its about true spit, my heart and soul is where hiphop lives
so dont ever try to tell me again i dont know about this hiphop shit
i battle my inner demons, one the mic is where i show my rage
i got flow like the ocean waves, im a beast at killin beats
and i mean lyrically and psychically i would literally kill you geeks
sittin at home all day playin WOW, Noble dont play around
most of yall quiet as a mouse, i barely hear you make a sound
all i hear is the chatter comin from ya keyboard, i ignore that
when its time to shine on the mic yall are dusty like floor mats
nobody really wants a war cuz they arent confident in their skill
if you wanna put ya money where ya mouth is ill have you coughin up bills
you see about three years ago i bought my first mic and mic stand
i did it all on my own homie, i didnt need a fuckin hype man
i use to be about text battles, text ciphers, text crews and all that
until one day i finally wanted people to hear my raw raps
so i started writin to beats, i was droppin tracks like every week
got some positive feedback, i found out i was actually nice with the speech
so i met mister J and he said he could hook me up with beats and production
just as long as all my songs werent about killin and cussin
so i busted a couple of tracks out, he put me on his CD
had a few thousand downloads now i know everybody can hear me
i had mad people hittin me up like "Noble you want to hop on this track"
and i never turned anybody down or charged them because i got it like that
i just wanted some respect from these vets and bet that i deserved it
everybody was yellin, tellin me how i was sick with the verses
met a dude from chi town on line and he told me i was dope
so we did some tracks and kicked some raps and he invited me to do a show
i flew out there and rocked the crowd, your damn right i was proud
so fast forward to today this rap shit is what im about
i been in a few crews also slaughtered a few along the way
and all this is what made me so strong today
even though life is getting out of hand right now i wont put the mic down
im still workin on my solo mixtape and got a few other in the works
still elevating my skill, i know i can get better at it
but still thats better then some cuz some never had it
so how dare you say you contribute more to the movement
if you aint never voiced your opinion on the mic then you aint proved shit
hiphop isnt about always typin ya shit and cryin on line like a bitch
its about true spit, my heart and soul is where hiphop lives
so dont ever try to tell me again i dont know about this hiphop shit
Re: Freestyle
Some Of The Words You Call A Rhyme
No I Know What Made A Columbine
When I Stand Em All in Line
This Ain't A sketch I Don't Draw A line
Nudge Em In The Head, 'They Don't Fall In LIne
Aimed At Their Heads Revol And Nines
On The Scene of Murder, Been Solvin Crimes
Been Losing His head, Have You Saw His Mind?
But I've Seen Worse In My Wild Youth
Shit, I Bang Vocals In The Sound Booth
That Was The Bell For Round Two
At The Club Got Fifity People Round You
With More Money For Every Snatched Chain
They Gaining Points Your Getting Back Sprains
No I Know What Made A Columbine
When I Stand Em All in Line
This Ain't A sketch I Don't Draw A line
Nudge Em In The Head, 'They Don't Fall In LIne
Aimed At Their Heads Revol And Nines
On The Scene of Murder, Been Solvin Crimes
Been Losing His head, Have You Saw His Mind?
But I've Seen Worse In My Wild Youth
Shit, I Bang Vocals In The Sound Booth
That Was The Bell For Round Two
At The Club Got Fifity People Round You
With More Money For Every Snatched Chain
They Gaining Points Your Getting Back Sprains
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Re: Freestyle
Oppress like Stallin; Domineering the engines in my mind
I resolved the problem of bending time
sought astrologists and witches to predict the apocalypse
twisted thoughts spin in my head like a cd rom disk
since born I saw the world through a philosophical lens
molecules evaporated in my brain before I was ten
blaming the pen for an assortment of morbid defiance
resorted to violence to break through the fortress of silence
the shortest of giants to whom I formed an alliance
forces of science I used as the source of my guidance
in this hostile environment, I was tireless planning grand endeavours
committed more sins than Osbornes have family members
clamming my hands together in dark rooms
its like I'm suffocating in a garbage from car fumes
but I keep up the luminescent show with a candescent glow
I'll never know if I could ever go and play a better role
I'll admit I benefit tremendously from my hard hustle
lifted myself from nothing that was all arm muscle
just in a few months I went from minority to majority
people tell me I'm nice, I'm red/read faster than a short story
I don't do it for the awards or the glory, fuck five mics
I'd rather have my eye sight than be blinded by the limelight
its really not about the fame or the fortune
if I blow up its going to be on the plane that I'm boarding
its the game thats important, I've got the best offense
take the win and give you the press conference
I can't suggest that I'm a sex object
so I guess its time to stretch this flow to the next topic
I'm less cautious but its hard to address how much I'm invested
so starved for success I'm basically anorexic
I have majestic death wish that I should underscore
but I best quit because I got to leave you wanting more
I'm still one of the Illest even if I'm not in my younger form
I hope my son is born in a fucking thunderstorm
^ I don't know if that's good enough for the scripts or not.
I resolved the problem of bending time
sought astrologists and witches to predict the apocalypse
twisted thoughts spin in my head like a cd rom disk
since born I saw the world through a philosophical lens
molecules evaporated in my brain before I was ten
blaming the pen for an assortment of morbid defiance
resorted to violence to break through the fortress of silence
the shortest of giants to whom I formed an alliance
forces of science I used as the source of my guidance
in this hostile environment, I was tireless planning grand endeavours
committed more sins than Osbornes have family members
clamming my hands together in dark rooms
its like I'm suffocating in a garbage from car fumes
but I keep up the luminescent show with a candescent glow
I'll never know if I could ever go and play a better role
I'll admit I benefit tremendously from my hard hustle
lifted myself from nothing that was all arm muscle
just in a few months I went from minority to majority
people tell me I'm nice, I'm red/read faster than a short story
I don't do it for the awards or the glory, fuck five mics
I'd rather have my eye sight than be blinded by the limelight
its really not about the fame or the fortune
if I blow up its going to be on the plane that I'm boarding
its the game thats important, I've got the best offense
take the win and give you the press conference
I can't suggest that I'm a sex object
so I guess its time to stretch this flow to the next topic
I'm less cautious but its hard to address how much I'm invested
so starved for success I'm basically anorexic
I have majestic death wish that I should underscore
but I best quit because I got to leave you wanting more
I'm still one of the Illest even if I'm not in my younger form
I hope my son is born in a fucking thunderstorm
^ I don't know if that's good enough for the scripts or not.
- IntrinsicCadence
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Re: Freestyle
Plex, post that over in the scripts man, it's a dope drop and well worth being read and commented on more than it will in this cypher setting.... Nice to read one of your recent writtens...
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I wanna weave my rap in a fabric that'll last
so I cleave to my magic and I battle back
when my greed tries to saddle on my tasks.
See my steed ain't to ride aimless through the track
and I don't feel the need to side cuz this ain't a game, mac,
I don't buy into your whack frame, and I flip my aims cast.
Sippin' on the rain, I could live for days,
but I ain't indifferent to the plights of ur rhythm
but like I kite I have risen to the heights given.
Heaven is within my sight, but my hell is livin' bright
and with everything I do to strive, I still find myself in lies,
that I wipe away whenever I realize, cuz even the white kind ain't right to my mind.
But on the sidelines of my time, I find in hindsight,
that I take flight when I need to ground my life,
cuz I've found fly eyes that help me rise when I look inside.
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I wanna weave my rap in a fabric that'll last
so I cleave to my magic and I battle back
when my greed tries to saddle on my tasks.
See my steed ain't to ride aimless through the track
and I don't feel the need to side cuz this ain't a game, mac,
I don't buy into your whack frame, and I flip my aims cast.
Sippin' on the rain, I could live for days,
but I ain't indifferent to the plights of ur rhythm
but like I kite I have risen to the heights given.
Heaven is within my sight, but my hell is livin' bright
and with everything I do to strive, I still find myself in lies,
that I wipe away whenever I realize, cuz even the white kind ain't right to my mind.
But on the sidelines of my time, I find in hindsight,
that I take flight when I need to ground my life,
cuz I've found fly eyes that help me rise when I look inside.
- frostedblake
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Re: Freestyle
1 and to the 2 and to the 3,all of these bithes is fuckin wit me,
none of these niggas is fuckin wit me
call me chuck norris man im bustin they teeth
like a dentist,in my bidness,and im lovin my streets
man im street,street like the concrete under yA feet,
you aint a kick-boxer but bruh you gon feel defeat(da feet)
if you up against my team and ya feelin mean
you gon' get fucked up like the dudes on pills and lean,
im still chill,swag like pine sol,foreal im clean,
100 dollar bill on the meal type clean,
fuck stephen king,when i write i write clean,
i scare them backpack fags in them tight jeans
pipe queens,bling-bling,im this mic's king,
on da throne im throwed,my flow is dope similar to coke,
in these addicts and faggits nose and throat,
even if the winter may enter,i know im cold,
cold like satan's soul,still spittin hotter than the suns blazin glow
none of these niggas is fuckin wit me
call me chuck norris man im bustin they teeth
like a dentist,in my bidness,and im lovin my streets
man im street,street like the concrete under yA feet,
you aint a kick-boxer but bruh you gon feel defeat(da feet)
if you up against my team and ya feelin mean
you gon' get fucked up like the dudes on pills and lean,
im still chill,swag like pine sol,foreal im clean,
100 dollar bill on the meal type clean,
fuck stephen king,when i write i write clean,
i scare them backpack fags in them tight jeans
pipe queens,bling-bling,im this mic's king,
on da throne im throwed,my flow is dope similar to coke,
in these addicts and faggits nose and throat,
even if the winter may enter,i know im cold,
cold like satan's soul,still spittin hotter than the suns blazin glow
Last edited by frostedblake on Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Freestyle
Blazing glow...Making sicker tracks than contagious folks
Using MPC's for bass to flow...under radar scopes
Didn't have to create understanding...To make y'all know
It's better ways to make cash...Than straight off dope
Stay underground like earthworms...Opposite of the trouble
I'm notice-able like sixth senses...Always prominently above you
Rise in a mode...To burn you when it's time to be gone..
Like dutches on sidewalks...Leave you on the side of the road
While you flaming & famous...Faster than Amos cookies in the furnace
Like paleontologists in marine life...You're not worthy in this service
Using MPC's for bass to flow...under radar scopes
Didn't have to create understanding...To make y'all know
It's better ways to make cash...Than straight off dope
Stay underground like earthworms...Opposite of the trouble
I'm notice-able like sixth senses...Always prominently above you
Rise in a mode...To burn you when it's time to be gone..
Like dutches on sidewalks...Leave you on the side of the road
While you flaming & famous...Faster than Amos cookies in the furnace
Like paleontologists in marine life...You're not worthy in this service
- knowconscience
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Re: Freestyle
lyrically the presence emcees fear
you cant endure the pressure i put to your cranial cavity
put your body for wholesale up in them sears
actually
i manufacture words so precise
splice up ya gene structure so you share dna with ed gein
you cant handle the capacity
dismantle wack emcees with the upmost fatalities
your inner spirit ran from ya bitch cuz you couldent stomach my reality
burn holes in biters
katana ya face up in a friendly cypher
knowconscience the great
i dump biters in the wilderness with gasoline,light um up
only you can prevent Forrest fires....
you cant endure the pressure i put to your cranial cavity
put your body for wholesale up in them sears
actually
i manufacture words so precise
splice up ya gene structure so you share dna with ed gein
you cant handle the capacity
dismantle wack emcees with the upmost fatalities
your inner spirit ran from ya bitch cuz you couldent stomach my reality
burn holes in biters
katana ya face up in a friendly cypher
knowconscience the great
i dump biters in the wilderness with gasoline,light um up
only you can prevent Forrest fires....
i smoke so much of that green i bleed guacamole
-redman
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Re: Freestyle
illest to drop spits,realest to kill-it,raps like 100 X pills cuz da bitches gon feel it
come at fake niggas wit tha heater like skillets,
im willy wonka yea im tha boss bitch
high as the god's is,used to trip wit the beatles so you know i 'drop-hits'
been on it like sonic,rollin and rollin up this chronic my doggie
feelin froggy?my guns dressed up in all black like they possessed by the demonic
get dropped quick,wheres the other side of my pillow,because im hot bitch
got every niggas bitch hooked on my shit rich nigga phonics
GANJHA,MARJUANA, my house more smoked out then a sauna,
come at fake niggas wit tha heater like skillets,
im willy wonka yea im tha boss bitch
high as the god's is,used to trip wit the beatles so you know i 'drop-hits'
been on it like sonic,rollin and rollin up this chronic my doggie
feelin froggy?my guns dressed up in all black like they possessed by the demonic
get dropped quick,wheres the other side of my pillow,because im hot bitch
got every niggas bitch hooked on my shit rich nigga phonics
GANJHA,MARJUANA, my house more smoked out then a sauna,
- frostedblake
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Re: Freestyle
immaculate spectacular rap fanatic,im living in this jungle daily,no madagascar
shitting on society with the pidgeons and my writtens go fast as nascars,
back that ass whore,tha skills and abilities,come quick if you do even quicker willingly
feel like mother nature yall mothafuckaz is killin-me,not literally
but with that whack bullshit mentality,emcees will get turned into outback steak with NO SALARY
kush and the 20's is green like celery,fruity ass lyricist you can call em' jelly-beans
not a single one could define what the art of rap/hip-hop really means
i been in it for more than just salaries,working so hard lyrically im burning like calories
on the mic punishing,over-powering,this is my rain all day similar to 24/7 showering,
shitting on society with the pidgeons and my writtens go fast as nascars,
back that ass whore,tha skills and abilities,come quick if you do even quicker willingly
feel like mother nature yall mothafuckaz is killin-me,not literally
but with that whack bullshit mentality,emcees will get turned into outback steak with NO SALARY
kush and the 20's is green like celery,fruity ass lyricist you can call em' jelly-beans
not a single one could define what the art of rap/hip-hop really means
i been in it for more than just salaries,working so hard lyrically im burning like calories
on the mic punishing,over-powering,this is my rain all day similar to 24/7 showering,
- The Gonz
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Re: Freestyle
Yo the sky is overcast, you can try to hold a match/
But my kaleidoscope will fill your eyes with broken glass/
I'm not violent though, nope, I'm a man of peace and quiet/
Until these weakened guys spit, then I unleash a riot/
Was on a beefless diet, but broke and let the forces own me/
So now I war with whole teams, it's my only source of protein/
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But my kaleidoscope will fill your eyes with broken glass/
I'm not violent though, nope, I'm a man of peace and quiet/
Until these weakened guys spit, then I unleash a riot/
Was on a beefless diet, but broke and let the forces own me/
So now I war with whole teams, it's my only source of protein/
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- knowconscience
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Re: Freestyle
my kick back lyrically
causes violent riff raff
I'm rhyming while eating kit kats
putting emcees underground
six feet deep
can you dig that?
all these kids claiming their spits fat
it's like excess blubber coming out of flaps
ayo just shut the fuck up
no one wanna join ya gay chit chat
knowcon
I'll slice ya in half
and make both sides batlle each other
with rhymes I wrote
that's the only way you'll be dope
causes violent riff raff
I'm rhyming while eating kit kats
putting emcees underground
six feet deep
can you dig that?
all these kids claiming their spits fat
it's like excess blubber coming out of flaps
ayo just shut the fuck up
no one wanna join ya gay chit chat
knowcon
I'll slice ya in half
and make both sides batlle each other
with rhymes I wrote
that's the only way you'll be dope
i smoke so much of that green i bleed guacamole
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- frostedblake
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Re: Freestyle
accelerating off the rails of the Sick-Train,witness the way i spit-rain,
no big-pay but my bars give off great knowledge so they call me the wise-inmate
my price is fake,so im steady lighting L's,my times spent precisely well,
harry potter couldnt stop my thunderous rain if he had the lightning spell
flow deep like wells,hot as hell dont remind me,
im too busy staying ahead of the whole class like im Hermoine
for what its worth,my minds complex,got 100 more references to hogwarts,
but all this running shit make me wanna start to jog jerks
when i get real verbal,emcees hide like turtles,tryin to run from the boss needa quit dodging work
lyrically,mentally,highest in the city as if god were in new york
popping corks,stocking swords,enemies get boxed and tore for mocking lords
got-it-dorks?nobody can touch me im outerspace,vibrations rapidly hit the place like 1000 dropping forks
no big-pay but my bars give off great knowledge so they call me the wise-inmate
my price is fake,so im steady lighting L's,my times spent precisely well,
harry potter couldnt stop my thunderous rain if he had the lightning spell
flow deep like wells,hot as hell dont remind me,
im too busy staying ahead of the whole class like im Hermoine
for what its worth,my minds complex,got 100 more references to hogwarts,
but all this running shit make me wanna start to jog jerks
when i get real verbal,emcees hide like turtles,tryin to run from the boss needa quit dodging work
lyrically,mentally,highest in the city as if god were in new york
popping corks,stocking swords,enemies get boxed and tore for mocking lords
got-it-dorks?nobody can touch me im outerspace,vibrations rapidly hit the place like 1000 dropping forks
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