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[Duce2011]

lyrically fit to the rip the mic
bustin raps is what i like
and motherfuckaz say
the sick ass shit i spit is tight
So why stop now? Because I'm white?
never puttin down the mic
as long as i live shittin on the hype
along with cha kids
the type to make lighting strike twice
in the same night
as you get up to check what it iz
mav B a prowler inside of your crib
looking to dismember a body
and keep one of its ribs with a family
full of canniables at home
placing thier bids and the highest one wins
taking the dibs, making it big
is what i want to see for all my nigs
Westside repping this westcoast life as long as we LIVE
got plenty ta give so tell me what it do
and the unfabricated way that iz

[probablyTreed]

its a little simple my dude

-- Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:59 pm --

also white people shouldnt say nigs in their raps, try a smarter word, nig isnt the only word out there yah know

[MustBtheGanja]

yea i agree it's a bit simple but i think you got good flow. Just try using more vocab.

[EcKsTaSy]

where's the hot freestyle?