Diss the "commercial rapper" you use to love

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Diss the "commercial rapper" you use to love

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Alright its pretty simple..
Diss the "commercial rapper" you use to love

Heaps of rappers hit the big time then fall off majorly! Lookin for your opinions yo!

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You kept me alive with the way you'd pile drive my eardrums
id wonder at night if you and i where would ever near some

you spoke to me through speakers, picked me up from 0 through tweeters
wrote to me in hidden features, walked with me fixing my sole, sneakers

but then your record deal came and you changed
the fame entered your brain, in exchange it drained

everything i respected in you as a man, an artist
is gone now and the man who started departed

I cant even stand what you resemble now
its incredible how credentials can plow

a good man and change all of his demeanor
not even worth name dropping, the "street cleaner"

you fucked over your calling kid
now only your failures worth applauding it
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Look...


You're Boring.. a Joke, I Bet you even snored when you wrote
I still don't remember who u are.. N you have FOUR HUNDRED POSTS ... LOL
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Post by Defiance »

damn i used to love the music you'd make
but now its dilluted and fake
you snake commercialized your worth
now your flows leave a bad taste
man what happened to you, you used to be the shit
so legit now its all autotunes and grippin the 5th
to hard to end up in the bed you made
now its all about money what a waste of space

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-- Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:41 am --

damn i used to love the music you'd make
but now its dilluted and fake
you snake commercialized your worth
now your flows leave a bad taste
man what happened to you, you used to be the shit
so legit now its all autotunes and grippin the 5th
to hard to end up in the bed you made
now its all about money what a waste of space

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