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40 barz of doom

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[ Intro ]

only time you put lines on the street-is-using-chalk//
u can't 'resurrect' yourself with a beat-abusing-pac//

I keep giving ya chances ur losing-shots//
try choosing-glocks,i'll put ur views-in-clocks// ( think about it)

put the news-on-blocks,motherfucker i cruise-on-shocks//
think ur better, them are some amusing-thoughts//

buy sneakers but you use-the-phpbb//
fuck ur laces i'll put shoes-in-knots//

[ Intro 2 ]

a writer? you just do reviews-a-lot//
i'll read ur rhymes but excuse-tha-snot//

keep talking shit, until ur throats bruised-in-clots//
in evil you just the maskot,u rap-soft, ask-scott//

holding micz at AA' meetings is when your-seen///
i thought you grew balls by the time you were fourteen//

my lines hit hard with more-in-between//
on palace all day ur just the four-chin-queen//

[ OnSlaughter Continues ]

but you aint got a fortune you suck dick for-green//
and you need a needle the size of my dick to keep ur whore-clean//

crazy amount-spit, ask ghetto bill ur whole style is counter-fit//
encounter-quick, you couldn't do my 'numbers' if you were my accountant//

music i'm all about-it,i'm better than you never doubted//
the only time you walked my street is when ya "boy scouted"//

talking shit? conceited, look at ya last-flow//
only here cuz ur mom-cheated, and he came out her asshole//

[ Advanced ]

my past-foe, needed a cast-yo, n he was a vast-pro//
class-show,he can't blast-no, "hiding ur punches" keeping ur brass-low//

this kids a cow-boy, and he's not from dallas//
actually it takes 5 people to put his avatar on palace//

micz is over-rated like the darn music-awards//
why don't you take this bar & use-it-for-yours//

with ur herpeed shankered,sick infestedness//
why don't we use paris hilton's doctor n-test-his//

[ Da Je Vu '20 bars in' : goes off the last 40 barz of pain ]

ncj sucked ur dick cuz he hoped-you-piss-sour//
but raped you anally when you poked-through-his-shower//

40 barz of doom, 20 in but its not at all hard-to-resume//
dajevu, what ur mom said in regard to her-womb//

micz saw ekoms in his mall-guard-costume//
shouted hey man, wheres the perfume//

njc gets ur hands out his pants n give this retard-some-room//
you couldn't use wordplay if you dug up the mc-yard-n-puns-tomb//

[ Jokes On You ]

romantic night, michelle and micz,snappin-logs//
as they sit back n jack off their cats-n-dogs//

my rapping-cause, to leave mc's trapped-in-flaws//
slapping-jaws, gunz? micz is only strapping-bra's//

spitting till ur bloody, and the new fashions-guaze//
cuz on complex, u can't go "over the border" like drug trafficing-laws//

loving this rap, i'm back lashing-cuz, with a smashing-buzz//
but only net-dating let's you know what passion-does//

[ Lyrically Established ]

i spit-first-when-I-feel-that-witty, leave ya ripped-worst-then-fatality//
i'll show ya my split-personality, "when the smoke settles" you don't come equipped-versing-reality//

perplex-ya-thoughts, disect-the-odds//
cuz battling me is like having sex-with-gods//

leave my foot prints behind in the sand, right where ya stand//
ur name is ironic you've never had one in ur hand//

20 barz, i don't think i need-to-expand//
like reality shows I exceed-the-demand//


[ Personally I dont like you ]

ur wordplay and multi's aren't-felt//
u even needed help to take I-know's rookie belt//

the principal is i'll have this hooky-dealt// (avoid battle)
avoid my battle, you'll have a marlin's bookies-health//

how you dissin-ya-teach low blow to ya nuts to make u piss-in-ya-briefs//
when i said ya were better in writtens it was a figure-of-speech//

in our battle you said i have a small dick that was a bigger-reach//
how you make a fictional personal...didn't i see you at wigger-beach//

[ The Truth ]

ur just a trigger-leach, hold on but never-squeeze//
i even seen scott drop better-free's//

ur girlfriend don't know about ur small dick let-her-see//
its just curved-g like the letter-C//

i'm in action watch this real vet-sir//
i called animal control thats how real ur threats-were//

u can't rap, but like boys in the "male-phpbb" so write a letter//
i'm putting this all over ur head like a sweater//

[ Knowledge ]

i only peeped ur creation drop because i saw-the-name-viral//
when the page loaded...watched all-ya-game-spiral//

some can blame eight mile, i never like ur lame-style//
only gave ya props...cuz I aimed-vile//

now i'm going to rip ya with no way out like being-chained//
take out a kid like when the semen's-drained//

i'm keepin it true the reasons-explained//
cuz i aint going to "fall" even though the seasons-changed//
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Post by lunathecursedangel »

the history of this is, on palace he quoted "i know i'm better", as far as i'm concerned he will be dropping a reply. At least thats what he said on palace. After he responded to the callout with a no.
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damn....damn damn damn.....daaaaaaaaaamn...
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Post by precise »

Lmao, The Tom-cat strikes again.
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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