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Walking the long and narrow with no end
While on steap slopes, I'm in a battle with a mountain
The big pic is irrelevant, if you cant see past the past tence
you can keep ya 2 cents
I'll give ya a trillion way's to make sense
Crypteds within a murderous plot, will make blood thicken
I decapitate a headless hen, you cocks can keep cock swallowing
Borowing from your neighbour won't make ya grass greener
I send you to the cleaners, you will hang your self to dry
Only you actors will ever see eye to eye
I'm on a path leading to the destruction, of all ignorant humans
1 man army I'm more than you're super soldier
I will keep the blood pouring
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I dunno, I'm kind of unsure on this one. I reread several times to try to unearth what it meant to me or possibly, what you were trying to say. All I can say is that I did pick up that there are some ironies here.
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Re: Freestyle spoken word
this was ment as a sarcastic piece
and to get back at writing
it doenst make a lot of sense i know
and there isn't a real story line in it
but that's cause it's a bunch of 1 liners stuck together
and actualy you can see anything in it that you like
but the key prhases to remember are these lines
Crypteds within a murderous plot, will make blood thicken
Only you actors will ever see eye to eye
these lines are the most meaningfull ones of the whole piece
and will give you a better understanding
of where I was trying to go with this
and to get back at writing
it doenst make a lot of sense i know
and there isn't a real story line in it
but that's cause it's a bunch of 1 liners stuck together
and actualy you can see anything in it that you like
but the key prhases to remember are these lines
Crypteds within a murderous plot, will make blood thicken
Only you actors will ever see eye to eye
these lines are the most meaningfull ones of the whole piece
and will give you a better understanding
of where I was trying to go with this
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Re: Freestyle spoken word
Thanks for the elaboration!
- thadevious1
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Re: Freestyle spoken word
Not Bad but Some Lines didnt make to much sense.
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