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One Night

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Blindeye , Soulow, Allrounda Productions on the beat

me on the hook
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Re: One Night

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okay Im feelin this beat no doubt..

First verse???...hahaha..good shit Nice mellow deliv i was into it...haha..lyrics were Funny

Hook..huh?..haha this shits Niiice Too Bruh..haha

2nd Verse aight not bad presence deliv was pretty good tho..lyrics brought it around too

I'll say this is a Tight Track right Here everybody did their thing..
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Re: One Night

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good looks thanks my dude
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Re: One Night

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was feelin this as a whole 1st verse was my favorite, hook was cool, the second verse was ok liked the first half but kinda fell off a lil... i would still bump it though
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Re: One Night

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thanks man the second verse thats my boy Soulow he's ill he'll prolly come threw to this site eventually

thanks for the feed
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Re: One Night

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This beat is nice ... it's got a Tupac-ish flare to it with the da da da da da da .... da da da .... There's some solid mixing here. The vocals sound at home on the beat and everything comes across radio ready. Second MC mixed it up a bit with the rhyme scheme but the content wasn't there. The first dude sounds solid ... might wanna experiment with only doubling a few things here and there instead of everything ... a couple spots got mushy.

All in all ... this is easy to bob my head to. Solid track.
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Re: One Night

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good looks bro and yeah i still got some work on mixing... i been doin it foreverrrr but always learning better ways everyday
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