I spit on ya future, mind-controlled puppet just a loser
You's headstrong, but y'a just another fake rap abuser
Accuse me of some, I double dare ya before I shoot ya
Precise darts thrown at ya brim, headless hen it's over
Gimicky fake rapper best if you wrap it up, cause y'a ain't got a future
You can beg me for a feature, but I slay low-life creatures
You no lifer, broke joke, dick rider, slow-pokin', trickin' lame rhymer
You can't fool me B, cant feel me B. for real this 's real talk from a O.G.
I'm on a O.D.B tip, best R.I.P. 'n forget who you wanna-be real quick
Can say this without thinking, you 'n the herd 1 and the same breathren.
History in the making, I'm putting future in a garbage can
Slam that fuckah shut, you 'n the rest of'em mothafuckas can shut the fuck up
like head & sex u BLOW-&-SUCK, but GM made sure that illests HOPES-WERE-UP
well thats till illest realized that i was gonna have to bring the dope for BOTH-OF-US
my SICK-SCRIPTS-FLIP the BRITS-SHIT-QUICK, so u wanted the future THIS-IS-HIS
but whats he gonna do, when his raps are uglier then the BITCH-IN-KIDS SIG-PIC-IS
i dug up some dirt then i START-TA-THINK he aint worth the time ta DROP-A-LINK
honestly!!! only time he bring a punch to a battle is if he was in CHARGE-A-DRINKS
i think u LOST-IT-EARLY shit when i said wow, u was already DROPPED-N-HURT-D
in fact im positive that this battle should have already been STOPPED-FOR-MERCY
but fuck it im a KEEP-GOIN-NOW but i'll just aim low until ur KNEES-BLOW-OUT
and devious you can call my punches "Gwen Stefanie" cause they LEAVE-NO-DOUBT
ok its DIMINISHING-TIME i hope that was a quick key cus i took 3 MINUTES-ON-MINE
and still i dont even have ta FINISH-MY-LINES..................................................................
dev, your verse was ok, nothing spectacular, simple but a bit basic in my book, no real strong punches, just standard matter of fact disses,,end rhymes were poor,
future, you are tryin a bit too hard in your multis imo, dont let multis dictate the quality of your verse, its dope to have but its just an element or part of the whole verse, and punches personals wins battles imo, you had some really forced multis that sounded awkward ex...
my SICK-SCRIPTS-FLIP the BRITS-SHIT-QUICK, so u wanted the future THIS-IS-HIS
but whats he gonna do, when his raps are uglier then the BITCH-IN-KIDS SIG-PIC-IS
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^wtf , is bitch in kids, sig pic is? reads extremely awkward, and its even more dissapointing because this is a 3 syllable multi,and forced.....i can understand if it was a 7 to nine syllable multi but 3 is very elemetary stuff imo....
not a good battle imo,, future, had the better concept flips, in no doubt and charged for drinks which is a way played punch reference