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That's the Shadiest PERSONAL I've ever seen that's not a Dating Ad on Craigslist!!Enlightend Vs. 88Skylink wrote:well either way its a lose lose, cus i seen you on YouTube askin fa people ta fuckin write ya lyrics dude
^^ This shit is FAKE!!! The link he posted was a popular youtube vlogger named DeStorm. Dude is making shit up to win his battles now?? huh..
Decent. Had a nameflip and a personal. Flowed well. 4/5I'll greet you with hello, then proceed with the mellow death of the oldest man to text and not be through a cellphone
Flip the soundtrack and watch you bleed to a cello...I'ma beat you red, light like trynna speed through the yellow!!
I liked the concept of the punch here but it was definitely drawn out too much. 3/5Just keep feeding me ammo...only time light's been in a bitches mouth, she was eating a candle
As for pussy, you're the leading example...round 2 you barely won against an 88 key...
so I must say: "Congrats, faggot......................you beat a piano"
Nice multies and a really good nameflip. 4/5How you fucking with me? You a feminine, puta....You couldn't petrify your opponents if you were friends with Medusa
I'm in beast mode, right now you in a trench with a puma...only time you hear 'Enlightend won' is if they mentioning Buddha!!
Weak punch. The set-up was actually a better dis. 3/5He'll diss my image, you can try, I'm immune...The pic thread? Nah you're more likely to see light in the dark side of the moon
This dick is a pussy, lie in your tomb...It's so CLEAR he SUCKS, Even HE'LL say, "I do"...as both the bride and the groom!!
Putting the quote in between really messed up the flow of this. I had to look back just to see if this bar rhymed. Not feeling the punch either. I saw it coming a mile away. 2/5I got this bitch cooking, you can call me a sexist....I'll Eat this pussy lifeless...that necrophiliac dead shit
and you SHOULD'VE been DQ'd, cause THIS makes my head split:
Enlightend Vs. 88Skylink wrote: wrote:well either way its a lose lose, cus i seen you on YouTube askin fa people ta fuckin write ya lyrics dude
^^ This shit is FAKE!!! The link he posted was a popular youtube vlogger named DeStorm. Dude is making shit up to win his battles now?? huh..
That's the Shadiest PERSONAL I've ever seen that's not a Dating Ad on Craigslist!!
Flow could've been better. Punch was a decent flip. Some forced multies, though. 3/5and now I've been reduced to facing a rap troll...invest in a grill, that's the only way you'll be turning plaques, gold
He's into interracial assrape with dudes who lack souls...it's science, light's known to get trapped in big black holes!!
I liked the punch but the this bar didn't really showcase any rapping skills. 3/5I got proof he's a faggot...I said "lets do some blow"...he grabbed some chapstick...rofl...Queer's his ethnicity
Light's been turned out by so many dudes, his anus got an award for helping conserve electricity!!
Decent punch. Not much else. 3/5first i drop, then ur gone, u couldn't even buy the round if u paid for a keg then poured one
im being truthfully kids lame, just Google his name... and the shit's synonymous with being a moron
Michael Jackson lines are way played and that punch was a stretch on top of that. 1/5he thought i was past doin um harm, till i ring his fucking neck till this wack dude is alarmed
and ya know u was touched by Jack-son... shit u even got a pic of Mike(MIC) tattooed on ya arm
A lot of wordplay that didn't really go anywhere. 2/5Leeroy's truly ass... so of course I'll have this Child so fucked up ur askin me where Julie's at
now the Darn Kid's tryin to expose a monster but this shaggy bastard still wont get a Scooby snack
Your best bar yet. 4/5after this expect to have broken bones cus ur throwin stones, im droppin them boulder(bolder) rhymes
so of course Light will fade "LEE", fold his spine, then put um back on the shelf like the clothing line
Ok. 3/5Le roys shoulders cant bare weight, hes a toy soldier an needs 911 in a hurry like Porsche motors
and are we sure this boys sober, how can i take um seriously sounding like a loony toons voice over
Nice personal and some nice wordplay on the punch as well. Multies felt really natural. 5/5so quit talkin, i cant understand ya fucker, honestly i didn't know there was a retarded Hanson brother
plus he looks emo, prolly demands to suffer, him an his boys in a shed, spread like a brand of butter
If that rhyme wasn't such a stretch then this would've had much more of an impact. It was a decent personal. 3/5dog survivin should be ur only concern cus i'm not a pilot but im still deployin the birds
cus u think ur the best here, please boy ur absurd, i mean u aint even the best Leeroy on the board!!!
Set-up was nice, punch wasn't. You really need to proof read your stuff, too. 3/5ok now the truth about this dweeb is out... yeah hes a player!!! but "WOW" is he's in need of help
yep this faggits a character and even his baddest stuff couldn't cook-E(cookie) if he was a Keebler elf
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