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Metemprical

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Another track from my crew Infinite Hype, tell me what you think! I'll be returning feedback I guess..........................
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hahaha really all i gotta say is dope as hell... first verse tight as hell man flow was cool man kinda fell off a few places but i think u wanted it like that... second verse i loved the choppy flow damn man... third verse was tight too... fourth verse was nice as well... this was tight...
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hmm..beat is on some diggable planets vibe..coo..

1st verse ya swag's a lil better ..rhythm is real nice.
the flo's close to perfect..some lil spots that arent in the pocket ..but that might be preference..

2nd verse.presence is good..his voice is good too..haha his
rhymescheme is nice too..

3rd verse..i like this flo too ..its pretty much on the whole way..this guy's got an accent ..nothin bad just noticeable.

4th verse..more of the same..his lines and multi's are pretty good..

5th verse? wow thats a big crew this dude sounds comfortable on the mic.....had a coo scheme and aight lyrics bruh...


i think everyone held their own ..ya'll obviously have a certain sound your shooting for...so props..i liked this cypher style track..not everything needs a hook..especially with that many rappers..good stuff this is a cool all around track...
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