Shooter Vs. Enlightened(Enlightend wins via KO)
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Shooter Vs. Enlightened(Enlightend wins via KO)
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Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened
truth is u need ta get a clue bitch, cus battling me and this fruit will get bruised quick
watch me throw the SHOOTER IN A TRENCH like im on some WORLD WAR TWO SHIT
i dont listen to a thing that this BASTARD SAY i just hit till this kids about ta PASS A WAY
cus i LEFT UM TIPSY when i SLAMMED the BAR on SHOOTER like it was BACKWARDS DAY
the shit i script is divine while this kids kicking his rhymes like he's MISSING HIS MIND
in fact this is ILLEST'S COLUMBINE... cus after i SCHOOLED SHOOTER he DIDNT SURVIVE
dog i drop nubees yep i'll reach back and spit in his mug, call it a coffee shop loogie
but before i DEPARTED i left SHOOTER in MAX PAYNE(PAIN) like MARKY MARK MOVIES
watch me throw the SHOOTER IN A TRENCH like im on some WORLD WAR TWO SHIT
i dont listen to a thing that this BASTARD SAY i just hit till this kids about ta PASS A WAY
cus i LEFT UM TIPSY when i SLAMMED the BAR on SHOOTER like it was BACKWARDS DAY
the shit i script is divine while this kids kicking his rhymes like he's MISSING HIS MIND
in fact this is ILLEST'S COLUMBINE... cus after i SCHOOLED SHOOTER he DIDNT SURVIVE
dog i drop nubees yep i'll reach back and spit in his mug, call it a coffee shop loogie
but before i DEPARTED i left SHOOTER in MAX PAYNE(PAIN) like MARKY MARK MOVIES
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Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened
In This Battle, Im The King and Your The New Kid
and I Can Tell By Your Verse You Were Running 'Light' On Fluid.
Your Not 'Sick' but You Need Some Medicine
Cuz They No I Invented 'Light' Like I'm Thomas Eddison.
All Your Raps Are Sad & Clueless
and I Can Tell Your A 'Fat' Ass Because You Live In 'Mass'achusetts.
This Is It, Now Your Death Is Coming Nearer
Cuz I'll Bounce Of 'Light' Like Reflections In The Mirror.
and I Can Tell By Your Verse You Were Running 'Light' On Fluid.
Your Not 'Sick' but You Need Some Medicine
Cuz They No I Invented 'Light' Like I'm Thomas Eddison.
All Your Raps Are Sad & Clueless
and I Can Tell Your A 'Fat' Ass Because You Live In 'Mass'achusetts.
This Is It, Now Your Death Is Coming Nearer
Cuz I'll Bounce Of 'Light' Like Reflections In The Mirror.
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Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened(READY 4 VOTES)
Both of y'all wrote a garbage verse. However enlighteneds garbage verse was less garbage then shooters garbage verse as it had some attempt at punchlines, albeit badly worded......winner ( if u can call it that).
ENLIGHTENED
ENLIGHTENED
MASSACRES
Superior- R.K.O'd
Quix - R.K.O'd
Duce- 5-2 WIN
360- R.K.O'd
Yezzir- R.K.O'd
Indefinite- R.K.O'd
Illest Lyrics Apex PredatorSuperior- R.K.O'd
Quix - R.K.O'd
Duce- 5-2 WIN
360- R.K.O'd
Yezzir- R.K.O'd
Indefinite- R.K.O'd
Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened(READY 4 VOTES)
I agree with Crimson. This battle was pretty awful. I don't think this is the best that could possibly come from these two. First, shooter wrote a verse that barely made sense to me. The best line from him was the Thomas Edison line IMO but even that line was not great, besides Thomas Edison invented the light bulb not light itself. Second, Enlightend's verse was better though not the best from the guy the verse had potential. He had punchlines and, if you read into the lyrics, there's a columbine theme with the trench coats, school, shooter that could of been developed to become dope. Anyway, I think Enlightend gets this.
MVGT: Enlightend
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Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened(READY 4 VOTES)
Bars 2 and 4 gave enlightened the victory imo as they were the strongest in the battle. Didn't really care for the verses as a whole though cause there wasn't really any dissing but enlighteneds wit and creativity won it for him. Shooters verse looked pretty uninspired his last bar was cool but everything else just lacked.
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Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened(READY 4 VOTES)
y'all didn't think the shooter on the bar like backwards day line was hot?
i thought that one was cool at least..
anyway. if you really want me to break it down, i will, but i think it's pretty obvious that shooter just came pretty terrible this time around.
MVGT Enlightened
i thought that one was cool at least..
anyway. if you really want me to break it down, i will, but i think it's pretty obvious that shooter just came pretty terrible this time around.
MVGT Enlightened
Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened(READY 4 VOTES)
Enlightened takes this pretty easy. Could tell he wasn't really going hard, but still had plenty to beat shooter. Shooter's bars were choppy, didn't rhyme/match half the time, and really wasn't very aggresive towards Light at all.
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Re: Shooter Vs. Enlightened(READY 4 VOTES)
I Win 5-0 KO... Closed and Updated
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