[this is all hypothetical, in this pc world, you got to let them know this is fiction]
I may not be a kid no more, but I still live for visits to the liquor store/
I may do it a bit different than I did before/
may not give a shit about a specific whore/
bitches be quittin on relationships sick of living poor/
they got you twisted on the kitchen floor in a figure four/
I’m sitting by the river wishing for a bigger fishing lure/
I’ve witnessed all of this for sure, the reason i’m insecure/
When the person you live with switches on you like the civil war/
She thinks she’s terrific, but she isn’t, she’s misinformed/
Fitting because her education always gets ignored/
Which hits a chord because her lack of fluency/
Is exactly the way she passively has acts of cruelty/
She’s Adapting to being an actress with casual nudity/
I’d like to stab her brutally that would match her beautifully/
After I come back from a massive national shooting spree/
Her parents asking me for a passionate eulogy/
Giving me a natural opportunity to blast her exclusively/
In front of her pasture and half of her community/
I’m not mad at her lunacy clearly I’m off by a margin/
But she departed from our apartment and left me heartless/
And hardened, why would she embark this regardless/
All those remarks were dark even if she’s partially retarded/
I hope she’s car sick and starving, sorry my darling/
But you could be parked sucking carbon I’d find it hardly alarming/
maybe you’re seeing stars and the battery ain’t starting or sparking/
I hope none of the parts are charging for being a charleton/
Maybe one day you will smarten, I wouldn’t hold my breath for a second/
Especially now that she’s been deathly threatened/
If you're getting the message then you should probably definitely sweat it/
Only thing I left out was a medical reference my efforts relentless/
I'm not expecting repentance even though its technically senseless/
This exceptional vengeance will leave you accepting you're sentence/
Pay heavy attention to these steady deadly intentions/
Cause our incredible sexual tensions are like electrical engines/
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