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Post by caesar »

heard this and decided 2 write a lil sumtin
-J.R. CAESAR

yea dog its jizzay

bull from round da wizzay

dont front on me

cuz u know i dont plizzay

short my change

im gon hit u wit the kizzay

i jus hop out n i let the thing sprizzay

u hatin on me

cuz u kno im official

but disrespect me

n im pullin da pistol

u can try 2 dip

but the bullets'll hit u

i got a couple niggaz thats commin 2 get u

all black clothes n a couple of missles

i got a new gun

n ill pop it off

cuz u the type that ll get the cops involved

im the reason that a whole lot of rats is lost

cuz i roll wit sum cats n a couple of dogs

we label yall prey then we commin 2 hunt u

i got some atlanta niggaz commin 2 stomp u

n i got some philly niggaz commin 2 jump u

me i got a shotty n im commin 2 pump u

if u talk trash imma hit u up

betta call the ambalance 2 pick u up

but i guarentee the doctors wont fix u up

cause igot a couple shells thatll rip u up

so if u got cash

then u betta live it up

cause if i see u in the streets

then im gon tell u give it up

he keep bragin bout the jag he got

but thats cuz he dont know about the mask i got

thats the best thing

u can eva invest in

or a bandanna n a smith n wesson

357 for hip protection

jus in case a nigga think about disrespectin

if u lookin for work

then u can get hired

hustler for life

i will never retire

best in the game

i will never get fired

im the coldest nigga out

but im spittin the fire

so u dont really wanna step 2 me

cause i got a whole squad

that ll rep 4 me

if they feel that a niggaz

disrespectin me

im the chef in da streets

i got the recipe

alwayz gettin paid

thats my destiny

im the best in the hood

but u already kno that

i paint vivid pictures

so the hood call me kodak

got niggaz on my dick

bitchez wanna blow that

thats why ya chicks on my hip

where da 4 at

i hit the club my names

at the top of the list

only 16 n im poppin da crys

charm on my necklace

rocks on my wrist

thats why the gurlz

wanna hop on my dick

u mad cause ya gurl friend

toppin my dick

fall back bitch

stop poppin that shit

if u step 2 me then im poppin da 5th

cock n reload im gon empty a clip

bitch[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kL1Za7Bbckw[/youtube]
JR CAESAR [/b][/i]
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Do You Honestly Think You're Good?


Your Structure Is Straight Up With Out A Doubt, Wack.
Learn How To Write A Proper Bar. An Quit With The Max Of Four Word Per Line Structure. When You've Accomplished That, Then Post Some Shit..:)
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He might be better then Jeezy. I don't know. Its close.
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Post by LadieHazard »

Wow lol Ya structure is WAAAY off im swearin u maken wordz up to rhyme wit wtf
Think iM Trippin? Tie Ma Shoe...
Cant Stand me? Sit the fuck Down...
Cant Face me? Then Turn the Fuck around...

u Cant Break The Bitch That Thinkz Nothin Of u!
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Post by Lawgix »

omg... i think samurai has some competition!!!!
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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Post by precise »

yea, ill be arranging samurai vs ceaser for illest embarassment award next month LMAO
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Post by Momeijah »

LOL Caesar That Was HOTTTTTT Best On The Site u Are. Damn, ur The Next Big Thing DAAAAAAMMMMNNN!!! Lmfao Jk u Suck
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