EkomS Vs. Sperm (winner EkomS)

[Ambiguous Realm]

ok well deadline now i'll drop in a lil

[Ambiguous Realm]

u probably got a record showin u win-less-than-ya-posts/
so wack not even "dez nuts" would invest-in-ya-flows/

formerly holy and i spit rhymes so my past-might-bless-it-too/
n remove this demon~semen like it's last-nights-residue/

im tired of wack posers, this site's degraded-full-of-rookies/
sperm's father must be gay cuz NEVER has he-made-it-to-a-pussy/

check it... this is most likely my weakest-"Quadra-spit"/
i got about 5 wins and 1 loss... but his streak-is-opposite/

babblebabble goodluck.. that's if u post up

[Ambiguous Realm]

ok umm.. deadline was yesterday.. i'll give u till 1 AM est. 2/5/06 to drop ur 4 bars... lets try not to have a no show here

[Anonymous]

listen..i didnt even know you set this up till complexity told me.....there was no check ins therefor there was no actual battle...but aight i'll spit somthing...

[Anonymous]

check it.......i know you can do better than that kid.
i'll go easy i guess?

sperm writes with thunderbolts ya kids only use the play-pen//
join a colt still no one would praise ya spits even if it ended with an amen//
im playin..this is only a 10 min freestyle im flowin//
VET? this nemises's a magician with his battles cuz they aint showin//
pssh 5 wins this demon will spit shit darker then your teeth//
the only good line you spit is from left over residue left on his sheet//
like comcast ya demandin-me to spit-a-free like complexity// ...WTF
you chose to battle me im the TOP-PICK(topic) so i know your UNDER-STANDING me//

blah...dude i went fucking easy on you.....we need a rematch...i know you cat..you can do wayyy better..rematch

[complexity]

u probably got a record showin u win-less-than-ya-posts/
so wack not even "dez nuts" would invest-in-ya-flows/

Nice multi's, and Some pretty decent personals.

formerly holy and i spit rhymes so my past-might-bless-it-too/
n remove this demon~semen like it's last-nights-residue/

That last line was pretty funny, and the first was dope

im tired of wack posers, this site's degraded-full-of-rookies/
sperm's father must be gay cuz NEVER has he-made-it-to-a-pussy/

Filler: a filler in 4 bars isn't good, but the first line was ok

check it... this is most likely my weakest-"Quadra-spit"/
i got about 5 wins and 1 loss... but his streak-is-opposite/

Not the best bar. But its a decent punch.


sperm writes with thunderbolts ya kids only use the play-pen//
join a colt still no one would praise ya spits even if it ended with an amen//

Ok, this line wasn't very good. Enough said.

im playin..this is only a 10 min freestyle im flowin//
VET? this nemises's a magician with his battles cuz they aint showin//

well, its a decent concept, but still didn't hit hard.

pssh 5 wins this demon will spit shit darker then your teeth//
the only good line you spit is from left over residue left on his sheet//

I don't even know what to say about that.

like comcast ya demandin-me to spit-a-free like complexity// ...WTF
you chose to battle me im the TOP-PICK(topic) so i know your UNDER-STANDING me//

The end kinda ruined that line, it was pretty dope. Best bar though.


Wordplay: Smoke (barely)
Personals: Smoke (slightly)
Multi's: Smoke
Flow: Smoke
Structure: Smoke
Overall: Smoke

Final Thought:
oh its my turn! in school I should have learned//
n never burned, cuz its true smoke kills sperm//

Ps: But not bad for ten minutes sperm. lol

[complexity]

-sperm said he is gone off the site- battle closed- J Wins