Strong Women

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Strong Women

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Strong Women do anything to survive
Strong Women blessed to be alive
Strong Women let go strife
Strong Women go on with their life
Strong Women rise above
Strong Women show love
Strong Women don't cry over a guy
Strong Women don't need a man to stay fly
Strong Women respect feelings
Strong Women remain strong to heal.
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Re: Strong Women

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Decent i suppose. I dont necessarily like the third line, feels like its missing words. Overall cool concept
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Re: Strong Women

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Thanks for the feedback
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