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Guess i can post a beat of my own here as well.. what ya'll think? i'm really proud of the chorus tho.. check that out!
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the notes on the melody sound a lil too close together, i like the dark synth every bar or two you used i would've experimented with it a little more maybe another note or two or a change-up with it, overall it was pretty well putogether the chorus was good but it wasn't a whole lot different than the verse
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty cool, the kick is a wack, and i think its a trumpet sound, idk but thats a pretty dope add-on u did, the melody is straight but the overall beat is pretty good, sounds like something like just blaze would do...but better(no offense) but keep it up, hoping to see more from you..
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Post by B-Bear »

wow.. didn't expect this..thanks!

i'll se what i can do bout the melody notes, but thought it worked pretty fine.. and i can improve the kick a lot.. i know.. but was somethin i did a loong time ago, but i'll change that..
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Post by Viral »

dis beat is pretty straight....i like the melody...n the background effects u added to it...def added alot to it.....the hook is pretty straight....only difference it seems is the clickin/elctronic melody that comes in every now n then seems to be added onto the hook n a effect was added......but good job on this beat...def drop more stuff
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