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*Tha Method: hip-hop 1979-2006*

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Jay Houston Ft. Luna-Tech(me)
?Tha Method: hip-hop 1979-2006?

(intro)
(flatline sound) u hear that thats hip-hop...........as we pay our respects for hip-hop and i want to say a few things on its behalf, we were the ones that were graced with the essence of what we call hip-hop, but as i stand by the casskit i cant stop thinkin about the good days, u kno...........but all must die, i just want to say a few words before u go for eternity.......



[verse 1- Jay Houston]
verbal acid realesed over beats to shatter tha concience of humans
gangastas gangstas kill kill, murder is hip-hops illusion
what ya kids see today is porn and character defamation
bet and mtv, renounced the positved to increase negative inflation......
how can the method be revised by just me and luna-tech......
no one wants to step in wonderin dawg why we aint they losein yet (or ever)
truth be told ya kids immatate what they see on tv mom and dad....
what their doin is ah fashion of defamation, which is called a fad.....
u wonderin why there are so many murders look no furthan than ya cd stores
wonder why theres rape and sex on everyhand look and see these whores
no respect for our culture, no mo positive reinforcement??
no one cares about their life rap tells u who to have intercourse with



[chorus 3x]
This is the method of revision that hip-hop is missin
I speak with verbal percizion, to stop this deadly incision
This is my culture being wasted on worthless items that pass
The teachings I've been embraced with have been thrown n da trash?.



[verse 2- Luna-Tech]
Wats happening to rap? now days everything is about the trap //
I cant relax an sit back, gota worry bout gettin clapped wita gat //
People are strayin, jus goin away'an ignorin the culture of rap, an jus playin //
Rap aint about sprayin, young kats needa get on they knees an start prayin //
Whered the good ol days go like KooMoeDee, DasEFX, an Dougie Fresh //
Rap wasnt about rippin up flesh, an it was still gangsta without a thresh //
KRS-1even changed abit, i noticed a diffrent style wen i last herd his shit //
No doubt about it the style of rap has flipped, the heart an sould have split //
I want to but i cant, wat happened i cant grasp, so i give up an gasp //
I really admire the past, the skills that have passed, may it forever last //
Disagree an kiss my ass, not many still bump to EPMD, or Run DMC //
The real O.G's, an to me, they are some real an true influentual MCs //
Any real rapper knos it is true, most young bloods aint even gota clue //
But me and Jay can subdue, an harness the old style we construe //
Ressurect those who perish, an long live these lyrics, that we cherish //
Pray for em at the local parish, back home an play that Man Parrish //



[chorus 3x]
This is the method of revision that hip-hop is missin
I speak with verbal percizion, to stop this deadly incision
This is my culture being wasted on worthless items that pass
The teachings I've been embraced with have been thrown n da trash?.



[verse-Jay Houston & Luna-Tech]

-Jay Houston-
Im misunderstood grew up in a nation where hip hop kills souls?
but its proclaimed as good, defemation fills empty holes...
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-Luna-Tech-
An those empty holes jus keep diggin deeper into the mind...
its unreal how me an Jay keep old skoo with our rhymes...
-
-Jay-
Overdose on xanax, is much like lissin 2 rap, its suicide?
Who u mad at, tha truth? the teaching here are all do or die?
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-Luna-Tech-
Young kids cry as their families die an fluides run dry...
livin in these? shit we all mise well commit suicide..
-
-Jay Houston-
Verbal depictions of illicit behavior subside the thoughts of faith?
Hurtful decriptions, of tha explicit have swayed ya, so to good u cant relate?
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-Luna-Tech-
An yet we debate, should we lock of the people that contiplate...
murder an these crims, sealed destinys, we made up our own fate...
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-Jay Houston-
Barred from reality, we think on the acts of our mortality?
Its verbal insanity, to speak the illicit fate of someones fatality..
-
Luna-Tech
Seems lik everythings done with brutality, an yet ur mad at me...
While convicted felons rome the streets inflictin assaults an battery...



(outro)
Rest In Peace Hip-Hop u will be missed now and forever

Hip Hop
"1979-2006"
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Post by complexity »

this was some true stuff, and both verses were straight, i liked the concept, we are going to have to do a collab soon 8.7/10
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Uppin this for feedback, someone needs to do it....
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Post by drunken jesus »

i'll be nice and generous with a critique


this was wack. point blank


ps - i survived a xanax overdose so that one line doesn't quite work kiddo
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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tkc 4 the feed.. uppin 4 more...
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Post by 16 Micz »

hm was pretty straight the topic was pretty dope used some good vocab instead of the same basic fight might light type of shit ill give it an 8/10 keep it up.
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