Till Tha Beer Hits

Release your best recorded material and let the world hear your talent. It doesn't matter what level you are on - you will get constructive feedback to increase your skills.

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Post by Viral »

My First Solo Track...check it out..let me kno wat u think....id appreciate it

it was downloadable but seemed to only download 2 minutes of the song..so jst go there and itll play it all

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www.myspace.com/Viralishere
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Post by 16 Micz »

vocab, structure, everything is good but the track isnt attention holdin but its pretty straight but ill be honest as possible and um in the 2nd verse i think..it sound like u were losin your breath and in the 3rd couldnt hear u that well.
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