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the object-of-rhymes is a project-of-mine//
u stay 'under flow' like an aquatic-combined//
with a pyschotic mind spitting chaotic-lines//
I'm an erotic devine creature who spits features//
a believer, who picks up on lines like recievers//
the leader, I stay above my readers, the cedar//
a rhyming speeder, giving bones to feeders//
cutting domes with clevers, the brain eater//
or leave ya stoned, reason to jones the reefer//
on the other hand, when i have a fever//
i'm busting in the homes of sleepers//
so i go from holmes to creeper//
stay in the zone, like unknown recievers//
when you hear the click, dont check ur beeper//
i'm weaker, don't let this wreck ur speaker//
sketch the reaper, carrying techs n heaters//
i'll never respect a cheater, complex is deeper//
send the suspect, to the Fbi for the hell of it//
i'll give you my full name, so you look intelligent//
It's Ian Craft, and thats relevant to the fact//
that i have a contract to kill, so i'm packed too//
to persue, n track you, my impact is ill//
crack a pill, in half, n come back to chill//
stairing at a blood bath, then throw ur body//
in a tub fast, this is unlike a thugs wrath//
clean up, the path from where ur were drug//
last, pickup the drugs, and all the glass//
throw it in the trash, n leave this all//
in the past, walk away on the grass//
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Post by 16 Micz »

damn good rhyming pretty impressive love how u kept switching the rhyming shit was good yea its going on the mixtape.
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-speechless- =xxxxx
my sig owns.
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Post by craven »

dam u guyz is good at ryming and still a fucking noobie....dont mean to be bagging but can yall give me some tips...plz..pm.....oh yea ironic...nice..ryming...that was some tight shit well peace
word...run ova a slo6
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Post by drunken jesus »

flows better than usual

wasn't feeling any of the lines though, they were all pretty simple

this was cool for a random piece
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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