Flow so Lyrically...

[Keno]

listen...

Lyrically my brain is twisted, disfigured, insane, and wicked
Became a witness to my own life before i came to existence
Creatin miracles not spiritual im changin flames to liquid
Never weighed alot but i can take a train and flip it
My brain design is the highest of all minds
So high and advanced i got Allah bitin my rhymes
Known to rip since the beginning of time
My mind so advanced im the one that was teaching Einstein
Never quiet i get mad and cause more damage than a riot
Fast as hell evaporate your tears before you cried it
Cold enough to bring the cold before winder could supply t
Yet hot enough to hold chicken for 5 seconds and fry it
Ya waistin ya time chasin keno speed is steady blazin
I can scream cheese and move before the pictures takin
My society stay secret like Illuminati and the FreeMasons
Hellish lyrics when i flow satan was one of my patients
Seemly souls i confiscate and make spirits evacuate
A cool nigga but hot enough to make lava evaporate
When my rage set in im known to blow that K weapon
At age seven i thought up the blueprint that made heaven
Physically if you aint feelin me then you feelin me spiritually
A beast in me when i flow so lyrically

[16 Micz]

some lyrics.. if u re-worded them a lil better would have been alot better but still pretty good i like the scheme pretty dope

"So high and advanced i got Allah bitin my rhymes"

"My mind so advanced im the one that was teaching Einstein"

you kind of said advanced in two similar lines which threw me off kind of messed up your flow i was feelin it til then but still pretty good keep it up.. havent seen any posts from you so since your new to the forum i decided to leave you feedback i hope you'll return the favor.. and if your keno from palace im sure you can do alot better.. considering you knowledge of rap.. 1

[complexity]

The vocabulary on this was pretty nice. the flow was alright, the concept wasn't much. But nice for what you were trying to accomplish.

Uppin

[complexity]

Oh yah. And up some new audio sometime.

[Subsist]

He He He , I liked these.
"My mind so advanced im the one that was teaching Einstein "
"Hellish lyrics when i flow satan was one of my patients "
"I can scream cheese and move before the pictures takin"

Though somehow I feel you can do better.