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complexity is the people at ground zero, getting cancer
screaming help, and getting NO ANSWER
the show-dancers, getting took advantage of
the republicans trying to banish love
n blaming their homophobia on the man above
all these kids joining MIke Jones fan-club
cuz he tells them to put their hands-up
complexity is a banned-drug, from Demand
of contraband, the Indians that want ya land
Complexity expands, its hard to understand
Complexity is stan, writing till his hands clam
Its the silent lamb, Koreas Violent Plans
Complexity is the tyrants, its Science
The sculptures created by the Myans
its defiance at the same time reliance
Complexity is alone on an Island
Complexity is Quick Like Time
Its Michael Jordan In His Prime
Its Everyones Minds Design
Complexity is writing rhymes
and not spittin on the mic
Complexity is why we are all not a like
Complexity is the reason we are all alive
its inside the people who commit suicide
Complexity is drive, Its also deprived
Complexity is perspective
Complexity is why bush Was Re-Elected
The kids in Darfur Being Neglected
Living every fucking day with a Death Wish
Complexity is war, Complexity is a Whore
Its knowing there is more in store
Its Dealing with being Poor
Complexity is obscure
Complexity is hard to endure
Complexity has no cure
Compelity is pure
Complexity is me
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i like this...not bad at all... possibly on of the more poetic things you have put up...but yea, i was gonna do on with this sorta topic, seeing this maybe i will...but not bad keep it up
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thanks for the feedback, ill leave something on all your topics
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yeah man i liked that poem man it was really deep, good shit man *thumbs up*
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thanks for the feedback, if anyone was wondering it kinda goes to canibus - drama
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nice man go check out mine man... gotta promote my shit lol
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