trouble wit da law

J-Majikk · Post by **J-Majikk** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:18 am

my second full length song. lol i kinda regreted the sqeaky shit in the beginning but i love the song. i really lke the second verse. the beat was made by me. and was written by me. also ive been usin mixpad to record my stuff ima bout to switch 2 a new program

jaytizzle24 · Post by **jaytizzle24** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:29 am

wast poppin ceo adair ent

J-Majikk · Post by **J-Majikk** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 9:08 am

wats guud boss man. seen anything u like??

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:23 pm

Your flow is straight, but it's hard to understand everything ur sayin in it. Not becuz the vocals aren't up...but because parts of the beat need to come down. Also...the way you recorded it or extracted...all your vocal's are panned to the left speaker instead of coming outta both. Which is another reason why it's hard to hear every word.
But if you fix those couple lil things and put it out again, the joint'll prolly be fiya kid!

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:14 am

nice track dawg re-vise ur shit b4 u lay it down so u won't fall off on sum parts and b4 u think its complete peep it out a few times show ur niggaz and wat not lol shit was good tho keep droppin son

Miilz · Post by **Miilz** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:51 am

When i Download it ..it Doesnt Show Your Audio Just Opens Up The Program And Makes A Squeeky Noise.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 11:10 pm

flow is straight, lyrics are good, beats kinda iffy but could be dope. yeah u need to re-mix it up tho and it could be alot better

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:51 pm

i had to take the right part of my headphones off like Kurse said i had to hear what u were sayin... it wasn't a bad track... the beat... it was different... like i said it wasn't bad man...

precise · Post by **precise** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:28 am

only problem was the mixin, flow was good, from what i could tell the rhymes were decent, the vocals only come out the left speaker, does the program ure using have a seperate track for both left n right? weird lol, decent track tho man, n nice beat

Miilz · Post by **Miilz** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:39 am

If You Need Mixin Send Me ya Vocals And Beat On Seperate Files.

Lil Munny · Post by **Lil Munny** » Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:57 am

Nice.

MicJordan · Post by **MicJordan** » Thu Oct 23, 2008 12:13 pm

only trouble with the law you have is in grand theft auto4

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:17 am

This Wus Coo Homie
keep Um Comin
Get On ya Elevatin Shit

Mass Effex · Post by **Mass Effex** » Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:39 am

That was average, keep bringin it fam
take that noise out too. lol

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