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when i spit these rymes u hesistate....nigguh u hurd or do i demonstrate
sitting back a fake nigguh fuck that...i kill nigguhs that tap that
sitting and cheating and spitting nigguhs that weeping wid pain
nigguh u say u got fame....nigguh u like an animal that aint been taimed...
ready dart...i rip you apart steal yo cash leaveing u broke
leaving u shook.....shock...taken ova..a nigguh tell u to bend ova..
nigguh punch u in da face poppin you down making yo face bleed...
im a hardcore gangsta ready take lives...the thrill of taking pills...
to ease my pain...take ma life...when nigguhs say im fake meet me in da back all yall mutha fuckaz is wack.....
word...run ova a slo6
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wack
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by 16 Micz »

lol some of the bars dont make sense seem like your just trying to use big vocab and putting shit together..
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not really a big vocabulary ^, well maybe for a sixth grader, yah this pretty much was horrible, but keep working at it, one day you maybe average like me -_-
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