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Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:03 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
GoodLooks On Tha Feed ..
Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 6:17 pm
by TreTru
dayum, that was sick as hell....son I wish I waas at that level dogg..
much respect..
great story line..beginning to end...like poetry style but with more..
combos in it..the hottest thing I've gotten to read here in scrips.
for as long as I been on here..
Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:13 pm
by precise
nice write
i felt some spots the story was overdone, like on the climaxes it was sorta milked, but i enjoyed it dude, reminded me of a denzel movie i watched recently, i loved how ya switched between characters, it added a certain depth to the story, n yea btw man bein a person who reads alotta novels, i appreciated the fact u tried to give it a novel sorta feel, goin into background details on your characters n whatnot
Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 12:08 am
by Philosopher Stone
that shit was crack if you ever make an audio to that send it to me playa...
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