a quick battle...

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a quick battle...

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let me break it down, I control a mental syndacite
renounce my past selfs, give teachings to those illiterate

let me begin with this, last poet, a fake Last of the Mohicans
blind lil bastard running cliff side cause I take out the beacons

I creep-in and weakin, breaking down mental capacity of thinkin
Can't even apprehend the Big Red Hand sayin' to stop Constantily Blinkin

come within reason, I'm here to take in this bitch for treason
every day every season, letting a man with burning pee do so in all your leasons

Strait Evil, I'm corrupt, Maleficient, I Work To Produce n' distribute Harm
Fucking Medevil, time space disrupts, colors magnificent, theres no need for alarm

suck you in, body tweeks outside within, begining to pull apart from sin
should of seen me, I'm not very subtile, like a Shark Rising up showing his Fin

no chewing, I eat emcees Whole, in every direction all regions I control
such a fruity lil man, walls are covered from all the Banana stickers of Dole

n' when they put laser imprints to ID, boys gonna become homicidal
but I'll show compassion, first into the acid bath, then dip the tampon in Midol.


after a dip in acid he'd be bloody...like a tampon...therefore...tampon. everything else well...should be self explanitory, got a question though feel free to PM or post it...I'll put up an explanation then.
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the first 2 bars were weak but it started to pick up....slowing down...but it was decent..6/10
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