Ok, So Last Time I Posted A Goon To A Goblin FreeStyle. From My Chrome Mixtape.
Now, Heres Another Track From The Same Mixtape.
Enjoy.
Its A Whole Different Style Lol.
Like I Promised.
:}
By The Way. U Can Peep Some More Songs At.
Www.numberonemusic.com/2k6siccspitz
Or
http://www.spreadtheillness.com/profile/SiccSpitz
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Definately alot better than the Goon to a Goblin track.
You need to drop more of these.
Good solid flow, lyrics were decent.
The mixing was somewhat "meh"...I don't know if you used a light echo or what, but the delay on your vocals is bad. Leave your vocals more natural, when you add effects like this on your vocals, it taks away from the impact of the song becuz it makes the words annoying due to the sound. lol Does that make sense? lol
Anyways...
Not bad, I like the beat for sure. Mixing could use a lil work, but other than that, it was a nice piece. Keep droppin that heat here.
You need to drop more of these.
Good solid flow, lyrics were decent.
The mixing was somewhat "meh"...I don't know if you used a light echo or what, but the delay on your vocals is bad. Leave your vocals more natural, when you add effects like this on your vocals, it taks away from the impact of the song becuz it makes the words annoying due to the sound. lol Does that make sense? lol
Anyways...
Not bad, I like the beat for sure. Mixing could use a lil work, but other than that, it was a nice piece. Keep droppin that heat here.
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dis track was pretty straight...dat flanger/flangus u added...was a bit annoying..lol...but it was ignorable..haha...i cant help but think ur lil wayne actin like some dude...LOL!..not dissin u er ne thing..but straight up ur voice is just like his..and i dont like lil wayne..lol..but keep doin u man....maybe u can take waynes spot if u keep at it..haha
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a little u sound like him
but over all nice lyrics
the mixing is better than mine but well
the beat was quite dope
some real feeling to it
damm dude this was better than goon to goblin
a completely different style i dunno
but it was better hope ya return the feed
keep'em comin dude nice song here
but over all nice lyrics
the mixing is better than mine but well
the beat was quite dope
some real feeling to it
damm dude this was better than goon to goblin
a completely different style i dunno
but it was better hope ya return the feed
keep'em comin dude nice song here
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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