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No biting/recycling.

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Aiyo step, i'll snatch breath, get vexed n snap necks/
So I'll sacrifice this pawn like CHESS wit AZTECS/
I'll wreck this affleck,.. for ever daring the devil/
Stuntin all gassed up, get crashed steering the pedal/
Temp who?, queer of the ghetto slash permanent fag/
Cuz "pest only gets pussy" when submergin wit crabs/

Killah shooting blanks everytime he takes a crack at a guy he's faced
If the name fits rock it, cause you never 'capitalise or ace' (capital I's or A's)

I'll wreck you special kid against your sorry ass neglect is fair
Dude I've seen more threat in killahs strapped to the electric chair

How dare you step to the best, I'll leave your chest, neck and your knees scarred
Defying mobile technology, you get 'no reception with 3 bars!' (cellphones)

Aiyo step, i'll snatch breath, get vexed n snap necks/
So I'll sacrifice this pawn like CHESS wit AZTECS/

THIS WAS AIIGHT..I DONT LIKE "CHESS" PUNCHLINES THOUGH.. 2.5/5

I'll wreck this affleck,.. for ever daring the devil/
Stuntin all gassed up, get crashed steering the pedal/.. 1.5/5

WEAK..

Temp who?, queer of the ghetto slash permanent fag/
Cuz "pest only gets pussy" when submergin wit crabs/.. 2/5

WAS AIIGHT, DECENT ATTEMPT @ A NAMEPLAY HERE.. OVERALL: 6/15






Killah shooting blanks everytime he takes a crack at a guy he's faced
If the name fits rock it, cause you never 'capitalise or ace' (capital I's or A's)

BEST BAR OF BATTLE..GOOD NAMEFLIP..4/5

I'll wreck you special kid against your sorry ass neglect is fair
Dude I've seen more threat in killahs strapped to the electric chair

I THINK UR MISSING A WORD IN THIS BAR.. 2/5

How dare you step to the best, I'll leave your chest, neck and your knees scarred
Defying mobile technology, you get 'no reception with 3 bars!' (cellphones)

CELLPHONE PUNCHES = PLAYED..AND 3 BARS? I GET GOOD SERVICE WITH 3 BARS, LOL.. 2/5

OVERALL: 8/15

THIS WAS A WEAKER BATTLE..BUT TEMPEST GETS MY VOTE


TEMPEST - 1
KILLAH - 0

Don't think the battle was too weak..Thought Killa would handle easily, but Temp has been surprising...


Killa:

Aiyo step, i'll snatch breath, get vexed n snap necks/
So I'll sacrifice this pawn like CHESS wit AZTECS/
*didn't feel it too much, not for an opener*

I'll wreck this affleck,.. for ever daring the devil/
Stuntin all gassed up, get crashed steering the pedal/
*Just a weaker punch, surprised didn't come harder*

Temp who?, queer of the ghetto slash permanent fag/
Cuz "pest only gets pussy" when submergin wit crabs/
*Best line of ur verse, couldn't save it tho, but nice closer*


Temp:

Killah shooting blanks everytime he takes a crack at a guy he's faced
If the name fits rock it, cause you never 'capitalise or ace' (capital I's or A's)
*Nice opener/personal, good start*

I'll wreck you special kid against your sorry ass neglect is fair
Dude I've seen more threat in killahs strapped to the electric chair
*Nice concept here, punch was decent*

How dare you step to the best, I'll leave your chest, neck and your knees scarred
Defying mobile technology, you get 'no reception with 3 bars!' (cellphones)
*Liked that line a lot man real creative*

Thought you would be a Temp in this league guess not my man..Would like to see you get active in the Battle grounds...

Vote=Temp

K Killah
Aiyo step, i'll snatch breath, get vexed n snap necks/
So I'll sacrifice this pawn like CHESS wit AZTECS/
^^aight pun, not very strong and no personal..2/5

I'll wreck this affleck,.. for ever daring the devil/
Stuntin all gassed up, get crashed steering the pedal/
^^meh..the pun made sense but wasnt damaging at all..1.5/5

Temp who?, queer of the ghetto slash permanent fag/
Cuz "pest only gets pussy" when submergin wit crabs/
^^ nicer pun ya best bar ,used his name too decent..3/5
6.5/15


Tempest
Killah shooting blanks everytime he takes a crack at a guy he's faced
If the name fits rock it, cause you never 'capitalise or ace' (capital I's or A's)
^^This was a prtty cool punch IMO..a lil stretch on da w/p so... 4.0/5

I'll wreck you special kid against your sorry ass neglect is fair
Dude I've seen more threat in killahs strapped to the electric chair
^^Used da nameplay..aight flip 3.5/5

How dare you step to the best, I'll leave your chest, neck and your knees scarred
Defying mobile technology, you get 'no reception with 3 bars!' (cellphones)
^^I liked this bar cool concept ..personally i got the the Pun so
a personal on it wouldve made this a real heavy hitter ..decent regardless...3.5/5
11/15

Tempest-GMV 3-0

sorry KiLLah i actually seen better verses from you in da scriptures and SB..that's okay keep doin ya thing..