First Audio Post -Rap Heavy

Darth Vader · Post by **Darth Vader** » Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:43 pm

Whats good famz,

I haven't posted any audio on this site yet, so take it in and let me know what ya'll think of this track. I go by DartVada/GrayGolden

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FlipSide · Post by **FlipSide** » Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:11 pm

this was hot...mad energy.. beats off the hook and u got a good sound the hooks aiight.... good flow and vocab...nice drop

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:37 am

I couldn't vote 4 this it didn't allow me 2 do it not sure why but yea I'd def bump dis homie beat was ill and flow was on point I actually played the track twice nice drop hope u drop more dawg
now would u bump dis right here
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/chi2c ... 16780.html

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the hook goes hard combat type track

Darth Vader · Post by **Darth Vader** » Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:43 am

much respect ya'll, I have a lot more tracks, just waitin' to hear from at least 10 people on this one, then I'll drop the next..

FlipSide · Post by **FlipSide** » Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:48 am

if u wanna get feedback its wise to leave feedback....just a pointer

Munteskue_lol · Post by **Munteskue_lol** » Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:28 am

10 people? Damn I don't know many people that get that.
Yea leave feedback on other peoples shit, too.

Good song. It was good production, and I would bump it on my ipod... but you could elevate your flow and vocab on the audio that's my constructive criticism

Darth Vader · Post by **Darth Vader** » Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:34 am

Proper, Ima do that right now..constructive criticism noted, Bless

Loon E Lou · Post by **Loon E Lou** » Thu Jun 10, 2010 9:47 am

mmmm......yea this shit ku. yup like da energy. voice is ku. production is check. hook is..............a hook. good flow homie. shits str8 on my end. deffy sumtn i could throw on a mix. good one.

Darth Vader · Post by **Darth Vader** » Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:50 pm

Much respect for the feedback so far ya'll..

NoVeL · Post by **NoVeL** » Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:03 pm

Mean!! Another ILL Song, You Remind Me of Shyne

Darth Vader · Post by **Darth Vader** » Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:04 am

Shyne huh? One of the sickest MC's no doubt, too bad he had to do that 10 year bid..appreciate the comment homie

Deciple · Post by **Deciple** » Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:47 pm

The beat is tight, your lyrics are good, delivery on point and clear, mad energy, hook is average, didnt stand out, i like your delivery style. Good Drop

Darth Vader · Post by **Darth Vader** » Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:15 am

Much respect homie.

K KiLLaH · Post by **K KiLLaH** » Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:39 am

This track was good but it could be better if you do exactly what u say ur gonna do and rap heavy!! like the flow was str8 but u should drop a haymaker of a punchline every 4 or 8 lines and stop the beat or something. Dont get me wrong ur flow was on point but this track deserves monster delivery on it. By the way who made this beat?

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