aight 15 bars
best out of 5 votes wins
3-0 = ko
one bar = 2 lines
you go first.
J-Sick(W) vs Typeo(L)
Moderators: Loon E Lou, Kuhlerblynd, Battle Mods
Battle.
Ayo, I dont care about your crew and how you -gays-play- we aint got to be the -same-age- cause I'll still let the gat put "heat" across your chest like -dwayne-wade-!/
If the beef is on I'm -clappin-this-whore- I've been a -savage-since-born- your whole body can get -damaged-and-torn- cause you dont know what the fuck you doing like -amateur-porn-!/
Cause you just another rapper claiming you be -gripping-these-nines- I be -spitting-these-rhymes- that -sicking-these-minds- and kill niggas using less than -sixteen-lines-!/
And think twice before stepping to me cause I'm a -general-,jerk-please- and if you win its cause your man's on your dick like -genital-herpes-!/
Faggot I'll spray at you till your whole -back-goes-in- let clips smash this -assholes-chin- him beating me? hah! we had a better chance seeing the -astro's-win-!/
Typeo, my flow hot so I -bake-your-weak-raps- you being on your squad -makes-your-team-wack-, -fake-you-need-facts- dont -claim-you-squeeze-macks- but if you do I'll still your own gun and -break-your-knee-caps-!/
little faggot.
J-Sick.
If the beef is on I'm -clappin-this-whore- I've been a -savage-since-born- your whole body can get -damaged-and-torn- cause you dont know what the fuck you doing like -amateur-porn-!/
Cause you just another rapper claiming you be -gripping-these-nines- I be -spitting-these-rhymes- that -sicking-these-minds- and kill niggas using less than -sixteen-lines-!/
And think twice before stepping to me cause I'm a -general-,jerk-please- and if you win its cause your man's on your dick like -genital-herpes-!/
Faggot I'll spray at you till your whole -back-goes-in- let clips smash this -assholes-chin- him beating me? hah! we had a better chance seeing the -astro's-win-!/
Typeo, my flow hot so I -bake-your-weak-raps- you being on your squad -makes-your-team-wack-, -fake-you-need-facts- dont -claim-you-squeeze-macks- but if you do I'll still your own gun and -break-your-knee-caps-!/
little faggot.
J-Sick.
J....lol
man you should of puked up on the screen, the truth of your sickness
you need to get a fuckin' whitness, call the cops and warn em you're on my shitlist
never give a fuck about these fake lil gangsters, apparently I attract and make lil Pranksters
gettin' me to wonder why all they do is sit on pally, cause walking down the streets...they known as faksters
makes me sick, seriously J, no wonder why you have Sick in your name
I give you the blame for society falling appart and becoming fuckin' lame
Strip out all your mental synapsis, so few...wonder why your head hasn't collapsed yet
battling me you end up like Viet Nam Vets, goin' to sleep and you get replapses
jump out of the bed, run to your momma, she'll comfort you tell you theres nothing to dred
that Freddy Kruger ain't real, but you like the cricket in my palm, you die on the paper and in life youre dead
boys acting like they got complex flow, connecting words that congest like a infested ho
for a fake thug winning, hell no, I'll show you how its done and I'm white as fuck but never detested yo
you ain't even gonna test me man, I can't be bested damn, you just another with a slit throat
end up fucking that hole, watch as you choke on my cock in your lyrnx as it begins to bloat
go on try and spray bullets, you spray spit, you don't got shit, you just got a pocket knife of 2 inches
boy probibly got a mullet, start the fire in the back and up it lit, and no need for me to go on and mentions
that you just got slapped the fuck out, callin' me and J your damn PaPi
that itself makes these cats wanna doubt, cause your shit come out fuckin' sloppy
I suggest you don't suck on a cock, like the rest of your gay fuck ass flock
quit actin' like you got a glock, cause your times ticking away boy...tick toc
man you should of puked up on the screen, the truth of your sickness
you need to get a fuckin' whitness, call the cops and warn em you're on my shitlist
never give a fuck about these fake lil gangsters, apparently I attract and make lil Pranksters
gettin' me to wonder why all they do is sit on pally, cause walking down the streets...they known as faksters
makes me sick, seriously J, no wonder why you have Sick in your name
I give you the blame for society falling appart and becoming fuckin' lame
Strip out all your mental synapsis, so few...wonder why your head hasn't collapsed yet
battling me you end up like Viet Nam Vets, goin' to sleep and you get replapses
jump out of the bed, run to your momma, she'll comfort you tell you theres nothing to dred
that Freddy Kruger ain't real, but you like the cricket in my palm, you die on the paper and in life youre dead
boys acting like they got complex flow, connecting words that congest like a infested ho
for a fake thug winning, hell no, I'll show you how its done and I'm white as fuck but never detested yo
you ain't even gonna test me man, I can't be bested damn, you just another with a slit throat
end up fucking that hole, watch as you choke on my cock in your lyrnx as it begins to bloat
go on try and spray bullets, you spray spit, you don't got shit, you just got a pocket knife of 2 inches
boy probibly got a mullet, start the fire in the back and up it lit, and no need for me to go on and mentions
that you just got slapped the fuck out, callin' me and J your damn PaPi
that itself makes these cats wanna doubt, cause your shit come out fuckin' sloppy
I suggest you don't suck on a cock, like the rest of your gay fuck ass flock
quit actin' like you got a glock, cause your times ticking away boy...tick toc
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i'll just vote on whats up there i guess
wordplay: j-sick, came with it in every bar pretty much typeo was really lacking here
multi's: j-sick, typeo had a few but wasn't as consistant
rhyme scheme: typeo, j-sick just used the typically aaabbb scheme typeo switched it up a lil at the bottom
punchlines: j-sick, typeo didn't have any really
personals: typeo, j-sick didn't really come at his name at all while typeo flipped "sick" twice
flow: j-sick, typeos bars were long and uneven and didn't rhyme half as often
vocab: typeo, you both spelled alot of simple words wrong though lol
vote: j-sick.. this was pretty one sided to me typeo also fed off j's verse a lil bit too, oh well
upping for more votes
wordplay: j-sick, came with it in every bar pretty much typeo was really lacking here
multi's: j-sick, typeo had a few but wasn't as consistant
rhyme scheme: typeo, j-sick just used the typically aaabbb scheme typeo switched it up a lil at the bottom
punchlines: j-sick, typeo didn't have any really
personals: typeo, j-sick didn't really come at his name at all while typeo flipped "sick" twice
flow: j-sick, typeos bars were long and uneven and didn't rhyme half as often
vocab: typeo, you both spelled alot of simple words wrong though lol
vote: j-sick.. this was pretty one sided to me typeo also fed off j's verse a lil bit too, oh well
upping for more votes
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