Re: Round 2: Jack & DJ Vs Rugg & Evolution
Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 11:25 am
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Two personals in one bar. Decent multie, too. 4/5Where should I try to begin, It was clear to see that last round Jack lied for the win,
Wanna deny it again? Cause your eyes must be sensitive to light the way you hide from your skin,(what's the big deal?)
Decent wordplay but didn't hit as hard as it could've. 3/5I'll kill you just so Jesus could die for my sins, put a Kit-Kat in this pussy n break ya hymen,
Throw him on a stake for lyin, cause how are you The Punchline King when you ain't Hawaiian!?
I liked the personal a lot. Flow felt a little weird, though. 4/5Someone tell Jack to fix his exposure, before Jesus visits this poser with a kosher Christmas composure,
Fuck your star Jew, your wishlist is over, so get back to serving Omega Bill as his fitness promoter,
Flow was much better on this bar and the mutlies were nice. Wordplay and punch were good, too. 4/5Together your not even half as built as Alpha Bill, Fuck this corny Jack n Jill,
Still black and ill?, get raped so bad in this battle he'll need the morning after pill,
I like this bar a lot. I thought it was yourbest one. Made me laugh when I read equipped with muskets. 5/5DJ's the type to have his beats remixed with trumpets, his shooting effects are so old it's like he's equipped with muskets,
Kneel down, your quick to suck dick, When I heard Jesus was droppin this year I thought they meant he kicked the bucket!
Killer bar for the closer. Multies were tight as hell. Nice wordplay as well. 5/5Serial killer? I'll leave you a raped abdomen from eight javelins cause DJ's just a better version of JD's gay acronym,
Sick like plagued pathogens,we all know you fake African, so i'm wRappin this up the way i straight Jack-at him!
Double wordplay and personal. Great opener. 5/5Peep the mirror, Jack's a lot further than he'll "appiR", I got a question man...//
...How's Jacko the "Punchline King" if everytime he 'goes for a swing' they 'Never Land'?//
Decent personal. Multies could use some work, though. 3/5& Jesus isn't funny, stick him on a crucifix & whip him til he's bloody//
Christ turned blood into wine... lookin at ya' beats your ass can't even turn shit into money//
Not bad. The punch kind of gave it self away though. Lessened the impact, IMO. 3/5Jesus you might of walked on water, but Evolution made you slip & drown, even I know that//
This kike's so whack, when Jacko said "i-touch-children" he thought it was a new iPhone App//
Another nice bar with good wordplay in each line. Nice personal in the first line, too. 4/5JD I'll put ya in a box, then everyone will see you're a Cracker-Jack so let it be known//
Jackie's gone Hollywood, now I heard he only fucks w/ 'dirty Hyde's' like it's That 70's Show//
Good punches and personals here. 4/5Like 'Hollywood - Jesus' is all an act, when Plex 'double crosses' him, there's no earth quake//
& only followers I see waiting for 'Jesus's second coming' are those battling him fo' third place//
Nice closer. The punch was a nice personal and nameplay. 4/5With James's claims, seems ya got scared, thought ya would of been smashed to pieces//
But funny how once I said "there's a-tourny coming", Jack took a stand & put his hand on Jesus//
Nice multies and flow. Punch was decent. 4/5I gotta laugh at them fake vets, ya ass wit the same text, been here 4 months and I’m already passin' them acclaimed best
Koms path has been so strange, yet, were compared when really mentionin' Rip n Kom Dumb like not practicin' safe sex
Nice personals and wordplay here. Topped with some good multies as well. 5/5Ya action has came/ left, & its the same wit Ruggs or you, wateva the second hand stores, you could say it's nothin' new
RE might hold weight wit a bunch of newbs, but we all know I could body Ruggs like the way Muslims do
Good personal, again. Good multies, again. 4/5Ya face get clutched & bruised, He must of fell from the new list, havin' ya name confused with, I can tell you stupid
The belt comes to you? Shit. , ya useless, cos I see ya record and know Jesus aint the only one that welcomes the new kids
Loved the wordplay here. Got another personal in there, too. 5/5You juss an ex felon that dudes miss, weekend visits he was cool wit, this nigga was a usable bitch then
& Evo juss loses the few he mentions, one of the illest when I put Kom in Grounds I don’t mean mutual decisions
Not bad but wasn't feeling this punch as much. 3/5I guess these two are full of shit again, Coz Rip and him means more to them than it has too
But of course his shits in the past too, coz niggas know how KOM BOWS on the SCREEN like orderin’ fast food
I thougt the closer was a bit weak compared to your other bars. 3/5Yall commin’ up too short for the last move, we done passed you, so that’s less debate wit tha shit
Koms got his best taken from Rip, and the only time I seen a “match in Ruggs” I was decoratin’ my cryb
Damn! Probaly the best bar of the match, IMO. Everything was there. 5/5rugged when a guy writes text verses as presents for friends thats a guy who ain't use to the presence of friends*
evolutions a regressive human virgin squirming getting in hotel trouble stealing do not disturb signs for his belt buckle
Good shit all around here. 4/5you can't touch this homie new name but evolutions still the same one trick pony just rhyming multis to death look
name every bitch you ever got and you stress shook cuz "evolution's" only seen under covers in biology textbooks
Another killer bar. The flow was tight on this and really helped to deliver the punches. 5/5laughing at this catholic white hazard of rapping spitting awkward fantasy bars while we spit shit that actually happens
eros what your smashing is average quit lying on sluts when the only bitch "fly and on rug" is jasmine from aladdin
Packed with personals here. Flow wasn't quite as tight though. 4/5e ya relying on plex to cosign yo ass to find ya cash your pathetic even ya cuz's net label was hesitant to sign yo ass
getting personal but honestly i held back cuz this dude "wouldn't be shit without the jew" like the seinfeld cast**
Nice punch that got both of them. 4/5homing missles'll find yo ass heatseek and dissolve your partners use to rape so this is something he can recall
rugged just take this loss and swallow your pride just say "evolution caused your demise" like a neanderthal
Decent closer. Nothing bad to point out. 4/5speech hammers yall but things i'm toting will blast aim and fire and put "smoke in a bag" like a vaporizer***
you two are hopeless at rap focus on that not even gonna end on a punch we're better even with the late reminder