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Well, here is an experiment. Drums are not my strong suite. Well, neither are making beats. But this one was depressingly fun. What yall think?

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I like the feel of this one, honestly. I could see a relationship problem track coming out of this easily, an I miss you song speaking of someone's family member or friend that has passed away, or anything along those lines. Im really digging the middle of the track the most. Nice track over-all though, no doubt. When I get my audio going, Ill definitely be getting with you on some stuff man. Keep dropping.
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Appreciated Murk, I actually just sent the a beat to Cadence and the topic's going to be about loosing a friend. About the beat, it was more of a can i not sound so depressed and still stay true to my depressed self with the piano. Thanks for the feed man. Hopefully once you start I'll be better.
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Nah, it doesnt sound depressed IMO. It likes you would remember the good things in that relationship or with that person you lost in your life, instead of dwell on the negative. Thats the vibe I got from it. Sry for not making that more clear before.
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i like this dude but i feel the synth aND the piano are the whole track. you need some energy in your drops i think. more powerful drums or something. i didnt notice the beat drop or change from verse to chorus. I love the melody tho bro. keep it up.
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BlokB, I appreciate it man, while reading your feed, i pressed play, and realized i must of muted the drums while exporting cuz they never kicked in, :doh: . They wont make that big of a difference, but ill upload it tonight again.
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Appreciate it Yezzir, I originally uploaded the beat with the drum track muted... does that make it seem fuller?

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Ah Man, this sounds so much better. Damn Im loving it alot more. I wanna spit when I here this you know. Maybe more deeps notes that high, seems you are going crazy with those, but it a good feel. Im really like it.
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duuuuudddeeeee! much better. yeah, i get like a athemy d&b feel when i bump this now. takes me back to high school raVe days almost man. nice.
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Alright, I can feel this instrumental. The beat 'd be a bit challenging to flow with, but with the right kinda flow it could come together real nice. The only thing I'm not totally feelin' about it is that techno-kinda-sythn sound that's there almost the whole time. The piano is a nice addition and really makes me like this as a whole a lot more. Overall, this is a pretty good beat, I like the feel of it, but may be a bit hard to flow with...
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