Look at Half ya Wins Pt 1 (quix diss)

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Look at Half ya Wins Pt 1 (quix diss)

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Quix's Victims
fuck it, stopped counting at 60
:think:



Your Best bet would've been to keep my name from your sig
Looking at me Like a Newport Like you're Famous and big!
What happen Troll Lips?? I thought I wasn't Worth Ya Old Fists?
You can't write 4 shit I Know this cause u dissed me with a Old Diss
Quix Lying is bad So I guess you rappings a Sin..Hes Yapping Again
You're Trash in a Bin..Newbies count for more then Half of Ya wins ...
Don't Believe Me?! Review The Facts.. 69 Wins Lets Do The Math..
I'll Leave his eye Lids so Stuck..While you read His Lips Go Fuck..
Kids Flow Sucks! Number One? Why cause you beat a 'Gizmo Duck'?
I Usually Like to Rest in the Winter..i'll make a Acception fa Dinner
Screaming you're TWO NICE..Dudes Siked cause hes a 'Definite, Winner'
Sons Sad..Relying on Re - Lying Like Some Fad Dudes Guns Drag..
Take Away Text He'll be Unglad..Three Count, You Beat Young Mav??
Can't On the Mic you Best Flow Text Till you Get No Rest
How Do you Make a Mess Of Vets..Proud 4 ya Time with S.O.S
Dudes Caught, Show Me 5 Fire Topical Pieces You've Brought..
Claiming Steady Pace Of Battling Heavy Weights.. Who ThOugHt?
you get no Shots with Points i'm shattering ya Bottled Views
obsessed with Battling Newbs,getting creative doesn't Make ya Novel True
you Cry by Bruise..Saddest in bars with Easy Scars..Hitting the Tiki Jar
Acting Like some Beefie star off talleying a battle against P - T - R
Passion Of Christ Reject you can't Flick Stones With ya Slick Tone
i'm Sick Homes..your illests MADE MAN?? Going on with what, 6boNes???
Fuck This E Goat.. Posting YEAR OLD SCRIPTS! you won't see Me Choke...
Heroin Quix is Appearing as RIP,In The Mirror Happy Cause He Faced D GHOST??
Toss ya Claims,You ain't holding off my reign Like a Empty Poncho..
Battle King up to Always Battle things we see Um Like what M-C Honcho??
He's Gore-y we should call um Safety Al, Run away Safely Pal...
Dude'll say Hes apart Of a Southern Gun Ring Cus He Took down K-C CAL???
Go ahead and boast how you Rap the Best While in the Trap with Tecs
Lieing Like Eve, Adams Apples Gunna Tap ya Neck, Vocals Left hit by MASS EFFECT..
you stink with the same stench Borat Gives..In My Territory no Rats Live
2003 obsessed I'll Rob ya Throw back Kid Like you robbed 'R.o.b the throwback kid'
Treat His Whip Taking Like Repo Maybe.. Fat Piece Lard'll Eat yo Baby
Grammar Issues, How Could you Speak So Lazy? Going Up against TOXEN Got his Ego Crazy
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Re: Look at Half ya Wins Pt 1 (quix diss)

Post by Kau the Lion »

Nice job on this one. Two many to quote. I really like how you kept a theme going throughout this piece but was able keep the wordplay pretty fresh with each bar. Some nice personal shit, too. The re-lying line was prob my favorite. Maybe Quix can find to time to write a new response.
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Re: Look at Half ya Wins Pt 1 (quix diss)

Post by Riggz »

This is probably the illest diss I've seen from you Haz. I didn't know you had that in you. The multies were tied tightly. Liked the way you used his past opps as punchlines (very creative). Crazy wordplay with the relying/re-lying lines. You went back in your hay-days of dissing on this one.

Quite the piece man. Big ups.
You ain't holding off my reign Like a Empty Poncho..
haha, nice.
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