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Love tha beat. Woulda helped if the sample was slightly higher pitched IMO but you aint prolly make the beat anyways & juss picked it to buss too.
To da song tho, really liked tha lyrics. Thot you held ya flow nicely on this. Quality is average.
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thnx for comments guys, ya Im working on this mixing thing, hopefully next song I will get it right, think I might need some new headphones and speakers tho, but um thnx for the listen and glad u understood the concept
Shits Good Man. This Is What I Love To Hear!!! Man, You Ampin Me Up For When We Make our Collab. Speakin Of Which, Any Ideas Yet? Jus Lemme Kno. Quality Is Good, Lyrical Content Is On Point. Delivery Is Smooth. I Think The Samples N Beat Overpowers You Sometimes, Not Much Though. Emotion Is Nice Man, I'm Really Vibin To This Track. . .2nd Verse Feels Better Than The First To Me, Idk. . .Love That Rewind Line. . .Good Shit Man!
Oh yes the concept is complete and the Im actually finishing up the lyrics now, um we will be rapping to Kanye's Dark Fantasy beat, so the concept pretty much brag about how u can't get higher than us, and that should be recorded this weekend and sent to u sometime next week...Although I could put u on this sick instrumental, concept being government telling us lies and misdirecting the public, but it all depends on how ur feeln... also that will take me longer cuz I havent wrote to it yet...
Lol, Can't Downtalk The Government, I Work For Em LMAO, But I'm Down Wit Tha First One. Beats Different Than What I'm Used To, But I'm Sure After I Hear What You Lace To It, I'll Have The Inspiration To Hit It Up Right. Can't Wait
I was lovin this. Beat was soothing and easy to listen to. You flowed on it perfectly. Concept of the song was great. I love Hip-Hop like this. Only thing I'd say to do is pronounce your words more clearly but it wasn't that big of a deal, good job.
There ain't no school like the old school. That's what I was feeling on this one. You took me back to the hip-hop days of yore and I felt the wind comin in my window cause this is a chill, cruisin down the boulevard track. Nice work, keep it up dude.
I'm glad u feeln it man...Im def. into the old schoo hiphop vibe, although now I might have to switchup and do some new school type stuff, so we will see how that works out...
you're very good at picking beats i gotta say. Your voice and delivery definately fits the beats you pick which is great. Flow is on point too. Only thing i can critique on is i guess mixing can be done better, but i can't mix for shit so i shouldn't judge lol.
all in all another dope drop man keep at it.
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Intro was ok.. wasnt sure what to expect.. but the beat is def sick.. but your the type of artist that does more then allows the beat to make your lyrics nice but your lyrics makes the beat nice also.. very hard thing to do but definitely a sign of a great rapper tho.. nuttin really flawed here.. im just bobbing my head enjoying it.. good stuff bro
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