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Beware

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Unfinished but Feel free to feed peepz

If Reached to a point of no return/
You should win the race like sperm/
or lose and be used as bait worm and don't get burned by your mistake stand up firm/ think about what you can learn/
earn your respect in deez streetz/ you don't get away frm the heat/
qz kids getting chased as we TYPE or speak/
dying the were lying, where they eat, drink and sleep/ shit is deep
never trouble trouble till trouble troubles you/
or you might end up in double trouble/
gettin popped like some Hubble Bubbles/
Bulletz come in married couples like labo labo (means two two's)
watch your words as if you playing scrubble
don't let me clone your ass and fuck your own double
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Not bad man keep posting though, i wouldnt mind hearing something recorded. This verse would sound pretty nice to a smooth instrumental. I can sorta imagine it. Mite wanna feed two links b4 posting though. This mite get locked

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bringin' heat but not the same shit your cats on
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Re: Beware

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never trouble trouble till trouble troubles you/
or you might end up in double trouble/
gettin popped like some Hubble Bubbles/
Bulletz come in married couples like labo labo
That was pretty clean, in my opinion.
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Re: Beware

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Thanks Bro is not finished yet but i'm working to add some stuff to it
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