Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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4 bars
Due Date: thursday
Check...
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-Break down Ya votes-
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by pest »

can we make it due by friday?
my minds not right at the moment and im not tyna give you an easy victory.
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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aight friday..
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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try my hardest to drop today. gotta lotta shita do and two verses to write...
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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no prob. i might have to drop saturday anyways
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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Just tryna get it outta the way...

i'll throw out your 'lungs' before you can catch a 'breath'/
fuck a 'paragraph', i'll finish this line to predict i've 'sentenced' death//

Homie i'll take your shine, Like im a black hole making the sun crash/
Cuz the only way ya '(w)raps dope', if they was 'written' onna 'Blunt Wraps'//

Somebody call 'Jack Malone' Ima Murder this Cat 'Without a trace'/
cuz ur bars are 'quick to disappear' like 'cell phones' in 'subways!'//

How could "Death" Your "Your Subject", You needa plead the fifth/
You a "Cannibal Activist"... Doggy... "Eat A Dick"//
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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Ayo..


This pest should be Re-enforced,
I can't fiddle with A Hobo that's Poor
*He's A pest like the One's On ELIZABETH TAYLOR'S CORPSE*!!

*I Told this pest To Backdown Quick*
you think ya big, you a white man in a black Backround Like Ya SIG!!
I Told Ya Not to mess With the King
not even PEST CONROL would want a HOLD on this kid
*without Estimating On how much pest spray they must Bring*!!

Peep this kid video, are you on crack? Now he's trying Racial slurs
Cuz now He thinks He's black!!

i told ya you was facing Ya TERMINATION, He said
He was a force Greater - Till i reported Him to billy the exterminator!!
My rhymes are the Force that's Major
i fleet this pest like he was hiding under My refrigerator!!



Expo's: Billy the Exterminator is an Exterminator on TV
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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fukkin dammit...
that was hard bro...

Uppin for votes.
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest (Needs Votes Now)

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We Need Votes NOW!!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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Votes here... Getcha votes here
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

I have a problem with voting on this battle, because it seems Immortal wrote twice as many bars as Pest did... Makes it seem like an unfair advantage...
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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damn! dude pest went hard. real nice punches especially the 3rd bar. vote=Pest
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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fukk it murk vote anyways...
and chad explain your vote man...
still 0-0
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by Chad »

yeah u had more punches and metaphors. ur word play wuz more clever than immortal plats. plat's wordplay seemed alittle too simple and jus not enough punches in my opinion. my vote goes to Pest
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

CHAD's vote doesnt count. He doesnt have the required post count to vote on this battle.
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