Loyalty

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Knight804
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Loyalty

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Aye, you can keep the money, peace, and fame.
Im just doing this to get out dis pain.

I been down for some months, but looks who's back.
Still standing tall, now thats a damn fact.

16 years old and i aint never felt better.
Now that im at the top, feeling like Mayweather.

Looked in the judges eye and said ima prove it.
2 weeks later, im off house arrest, who would have knew it.

Never been scared and never will i be.
Always gonna be 100 till i D.I.E. .

Yes i fly high and i will succeed.
Always gonna soar over all my enemys.

I am 2011 best new underground artist.
No, im not coniceted, i just know i go the hardest.

You don't want beef, ill just call my boy Tytan.
We thrive off beef, we love to frighting.
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Keep ya head up solider you coming home.
Thats the words i took as talking from the phone.

Shackles around my waist, shackles around my hands.
Never in my life did i see myself being where i am.

Coming out the cell to the to see my parents.
Worst feeling in the world, feeling oh so embarrssed.

I said hey mom and dad, just trying to keep my tears in.
Eating me up inside, so i had to let it out on the pen.

Mom was a wreck and dad was too.
Looking in there eyes, i knew what they were going through.

You probaly never pictured your perfect son being in jail.
But reality hit and i had to pay in a place called hell.

Always remember'd that dad said, he was gonna get me out.
And he didn't lie, he got me out.

Love him to death, where would i be without him.
Probaly still in jail, 6 feet under at the bottom.

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And thats real stuff, were all not the best.
We just have to keep riding till we pass the rest.

Mom we don't have the closet relationship, yes i know.
Im trying to make things better, you just don't know.

Please just give me the chance, to express myself.
Were all under stress, we all need help.

And To my boys at home, you know yall my bros.
Justin, Devin, Ray, Bros over hoes.

And yall know we gonna ride until death does us apart.
Jus remember, i love all yall and thats from the heart.

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MonuMental
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Re: Loyalty

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Cool flow, cool message. It's never bad to speak on real shit with confidence and a fuck it attitude. All I gotta say is watch your spelling, bruh. That can kill a written for someone like me. Stay up and keep posting.
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Re: Loyalty

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I like the context/story. Try and take out some of the I's, like I me this I me that, start and stopping
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