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7 Bars/14 lines (MAX)
Due 96 hours(4 days) from time of this thread
First to 5 votes (3-0=ko/4-1=tko). Each day late is 1 against you
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3rd String QB's topic is "Murder witness"
Deception's topic is "My super power"
3rd String QB vs Deception (1st Round)
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Re: 3rd String QB vs Deception (1st Round)
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Re: 3rd String QB vs Deception (1st Round)
My friend approached me at the store but im always discreet with her
circumspect but not for respect to her fiance because beatings occur
I hoped for a change but the anxiety of loneliness kept her submissive
I reached out to hug her and started having a psychic premonition
she began washing dishes and he entered the door hyped with chaotic energy
yelled how worthless of a woman she was to pile on more stoic misery
fine physically but mentally exausted from being scarred and missing sleep
taken intentionally especially with him hitting her so viciously
usually a few slaps was it, but he threw and kicked her until she grabbed a knife
from the kitchen, she kicked his left knee and stabbed his right
the other remaining slashes made deep gashes penetrating like meteor craters
I flashed out, she kissed my face and said to me we should meet up later
next day I read the scenario, not from a book but instead the news paper
dna evidence said she removed his body using an apartment elevator
*Edited for grammatical errors
circumspect but not for respect to her fiance because beatings occur
I hoped for a change but the anxiety of loneliness kept her submissive
I reached out to hug her and started having a psychic premonition
she began washing dishes and he entered the door hyped with chaotic energy
yelled how worthless of a woman she was to pile on more stoic misery
fine physically but mentally exausted from being scarred and missing sleep
taken intentionally especially with him hitting her so viciously
usually a few slaps was it, but he threw and kicked her until she grabbed a knife
from the kitchen, she kicked his left knee and stabbed his right
the other remaining slashes made deep gashes penetrating like meteor craters
I flashed out, she kissed my face and said to me we should meet up later
next day I read the scenario, not from a book but instead the news paper
dna evidence said she removed his body using an apartment elevator
*Edited for grammatical errors
Last edited by Sir Kevin O Shea on Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:29 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: 3rd String QB vs Deception (1st Round)
this was sad... i was really expecting deception to show since panda suggested
qb wins by no show
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qb wins by no show
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