The definition of
love
is the Unconditional liking
towards
an object in which you show
affection and
compassion towards...
You were my first and
last, i miss
you....
Love
is an expression of
faith
that you have the best object
IN YOUR GRASP.
an object that makes you feel like
god
and you will fight for to keep...
Love is not giving a
Flying fuck
what others say about the object
of affection...
Its going for what what you
believe
makes you feel most pure and
happy...
The sad thing is that love can be a
One way ride...
Where as much as you think the other
loves you
Its not there
And thats the heart killing side...
Through me and you i've learned the
ups and downs of love
Yet through the good and the bad
i still know that
love
serves some type of purpose...
And through the good and the bad
i've still managed to
hold on
to my
hope
and faith
I do believe that love exists because
I feel it...
Its Just that i dont have my object to
express it too...
I love you to this day and many more
to come...
Im sorry
i wasnt what you wanted...
I love you
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What is love (im not a poet)
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What is love (im not a poet)
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Re: What is love (im not a poet)
Wow very deep... I liked how u wrote it with direction.. it was very smooth but still had the ups and Downs of the emotions behind the words
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Re: What is love (im not a poet)
perfectly put man I loved the whole thing.Through me and you i've learned the
ups and downs of love
Yet through the good and the bad
i still know that
love
serves some type of purpose...
And through the good and the bad
i've still managed to
hold on
to my
hope
and faith
I do believe that love exists because
I feel it...
Its Just that i dont have my object to
express it too...
POET OF THE YEAR 2011
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
Re: What is love (im not a poet)
I 'loved' it!
=P
I liked the simplicity of the piece.
Nice flow.
Loved the personalization.
Just one problem.
<3
=P
I liked the simplicity of the piece.
Nice flow.
Loved the personalization.
Just one problem.
You shouldn't be apologizing.Im sorry
i wasnt what you wanted...
<3
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