xpliss vs plague_arsonist (xpliss wins 5-3)

[plague_arsonist]

72 hours from now is deadline
bars below 16

[Enlightend]

bars here are considered 2 lines just fyi

[plague_arsonist]

o ok well lets go below 10

[Xpliss]

4-6 bars 8-12 lines

Check...

-- Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:42 pm --

The only thing you burning is dirt weed from a sad stash/
arsonist or just a pyro with herpes and a bad rash/
See I feed off the hype~with the weed in my pipe/
put ya matches away nobody said they needed a light/
My punchlines blow you away based on the keys that I type/
Dumb down your demise so even you might be readin it right/
Punches in bunches~ first 2 in the gut~ then 2 in the head/
could tell from the call out even your all out would ruin the thread/
Lets just hope your verse don't come out as bad as your english/
Keystyles burst your bubble till ya lil fires extinguish/



posted by him from the callout
"wats up go ahead and gimme sum to do cuz waiting is sum i dont like to do"

Been a long time, hope it's a decent read


-- Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:57 pm --

Vote~http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/shazo ... 23312.html

[plague_arsonist]

ok so personally ill give u a six cuz i mean hey at least u tried
but ima dick so ima murder you im tryna hurt ya self esteem and pride

see im the verbal assassin question me i guarantee ull be miss in action
plus im equipped with the men and black gadget after i flash it everybody like wtf happen

im like a mvp, legendary x3, its 7 deadly plagues so its rest in piece,stand next to me,then i will feast,then i become a drug abuser no more X-2-SEE

see u shoulda did ya home work x cuz now ima turn u to a punching bag for hire, u beating me wtf u aint smokey the bear and this isnt a forest fire

so if u think that u a match for me well let me strike u on the spot
once my team grip them beams proactive wouldnt get rid of them red dots

still just threw that last bar in lol

and vote link http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/never ... 23471.html

-- Sat Aug 13, 2011 8:34 pm --

upping for votes and to xpliss good shit

[Tha Dark Prince]

Punches: Tie | Both never really had anything outstanding to me, it felt like both writers held back kinda, plague some bars were not punches like your 2nd one, and nothing was hard hitting enough except maybe that x 2 see line, xpliss didn't have anything hard hitting too imo
Flow: Xpliss | Both had a good flow on their drops but I think he edged this category
Personals: Xpliss just had more..
Multis:Xpliss this maybe arguable but imo x had a tighter scheme with the multis and edges this
Enjoyment:tie battlers go at each others throats and try ta destroy each other, this felt like y'all were just in a training session if you know what I mean, oh and plague, it's a bad idea to write based on your opponents verse.. just sayin

Nice test battle, let's see more drops

MVGT: Xpliss

1-0

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[88SkyLink]

Well..this battle wasn't the best one tbh

There was no hard-hitting punches as DP said,it lacked strong personals and there was no, if not, very less multies used from the both of you, so it all seemed like a basic for me..

Xpliss, You're first bar was really good, but then if kinda collapsed. I believe you got the idea of how to diss someone , you just need work on thinking original and strong lines

Plague_Arsonist, you was using to much 'me' lines, those kinda lines are weak in battles, and you lacked strong personals

The better battler for me was Xpliss cuz in the battle, cuz he had the stronger bars..the best line from this battle was..

/

The only thing you burning is dirt weed from a sad stash/
arsonist or just a pyro with herpes and a bad rash
- Xpliss

So, all in all, MVGT Xpliss

A decent but basic battle, but in due time the both of you will elevate if you keep battling, so keep it up..peace

[pest]

fukk both of the former votes...

i do agree both verses were not battle worthy, good drops none the less.

punches; plague.... the x-2-see shit was dope.
flow: tie
personals: none
wordplay: plague
nameplay: plague
creativity: neither

mvgt: plague.


attack more guys, and dont give yourself hype. a battle isnt about u, its about fukking them up
enjoyment: plague

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[jayzon_black]

I feel you pest, but I'm going with xpliss on this one. Cat handled with the flow the multis and in my opinion the punches too. It made the joint more enjoyable and thats why he's getting my vote.

MVGT: Xpliss

[- Calico -]

Punchlines: P.A.

Personals: P.A.

Flow: X

Multies: None

Enjoyment: P.A.

Vote: P.A.

Not the greatest but it is a nice start. Dig some and go for more than just a name flip. Also throw diversify your Punchlines. Whether that be through Multies, Wordplay, etc. is your call. X had a decent Flow but P.A. went a little deeper than you with the Personals. I had X winning until that proactive line. Somewhatt played but at least it was a step in how you should have been rapping all along. Both of you have potential. Good Luck to the both of you.

[plague_arsonist]

so it 3-2 he wins right??

[Xpliss]

I didn't expect to win with personals consider the callout was his only post...
Good stuff tho, I underestimated you based on your grammar and just typed off the top... We didn't specify the number of votes and I believe standard is 5 to win or 3-0 for a ko... So It's 3-2 and still open...

-- Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:53 pm --

Also standard rules say no "feeding" which means saying something based on my verse as the dark prince pointed out, I don't care considering it was
our first battle... Your the first opponent to show up since I been on this site...

[Thu Hem]

Well keep it up both of ya... this aint the best battle though

MVGT- P.A

[Xpliss]

Edited to remove negative ignorance...

[mOsArt]

The only thing you burning is dirt weed from a sad stash/
arsonist or just a pyro with herpes and a bad rash/

ok so personally ill give u a six cuz i mean hey at least u tried
but ima dick so ima murder you im tryna hurt ya self esteem and pride

This was a vote for Xpliss..decent setup and punch delivery
PA setup and gave a wave instead of finishing strongly...

See I feed off the hype~with the weed in my pipe/
put ya matches away nobody said they needed a light/

see im the verbal assassin question me i guarantee ull be miss in action
plus im equipped with the men and black gadget after i flash it everybody like wtf happen

I mean...I agree with PA on "like wtf happen" to both of yas on this..lol ya both gave just setups and no finishers...just polishing and one personal in the favor of Xpliss...I guess you go with Xpliss on this

My punchlines blow you away based on the keys that I type/
Dumb down your demise so even you might be readin it right

im like a mvp, legendary x3, its 7 deadly plagues so its rest in piece,stand next to me,then i will feast,then i become a drug abuser no more X-2-SEE

LOL...now we both became comical and I enjoy that when you put a nice punch to it..you gotta look at this right just like Xpliss says you'll be basically lieing down kid when he dumb it down...lol..and PA..you coulda got this vote if you wouldn't be jumping and fumbling with stuff that doesn't make sense but end with a punch? Show your homework..you basically gave me a nice answer with no problem to be solved....STAND next to me, then I will feast (after you just said he rest in peace on the setup) then I become a drug abuser no more X-2-SEE.NICE but there's no structure...vote Xpliss

Punches in bunches~ first 2 in the gut~ then 2 in the head/
could tell from the call out even your all out would ruin the thread/

see u shoulda did ya home work x cuz now ima turn u to a punching bag for hire, u beating me wtf u aint smokey the bear and this isnt a forest fire

PA came comical but just gave a laugh with no punch at all on this part...Xpliss...oooooooh stop it dukes could tell from the call out even you ALL OUT (his best) would ruin the thread...lol...I likes...gotta read between the lines people...lol...Nice yo

Lets just hope your verse don't come out as bad as your english/
Keystyles burst your bubble till ya lil fires extinguish/

so if u think that u a match for me well let me strike u on the spot
once my team grip them beams proactive wouldnt get rid of them red dots

Aight...time for votes on the closure....awful on both parts..lol...closure?!!! means CLOSURE!!! I can't stand a verse spitten no matter the level of Niceness..lol is that a word?..lol..but to finish off a battle at that verse...PA again..you're palt or whatever it is the gentlemen shout when shooting those clay discs...but you're fucking missing...excuse my french kid..finish it off aight? Xpliss...lol...you extinguished his fire..you just basically said don't touch me...you better not touch me...the typical 5th grade line right before a push and shove..C'mon fellas...lets do this right on ya next battles...NO VOTE..

Overall I gotta go with Xpliss...Better Structure...better punches and somewhat personals..and a couple of over the heads in there that make ya think even though I caught it off the top...I still liked them...