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5 bars

48 hours

3-0 is K.O, 4-1 is T.K.O

U cool with that?

I'm down. Let's do it. Consider this my check, links will come with the drop.

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-- Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:49 am --

Ok...

I'm starting to question this fag, I swear this query/queer-y-is-whack
Anyone rarely hears-all-his-track, but he can't 'escape my bars' if he was 'Serious/Sirius-Black'

I dont need to try cuz on the midst he put himself under strike (Jayzon _ Black
Bitch stretches his bars longer than skin of plumper dykes lol

You're lyin on falsehood, you can't stand-the-truth, you couldn't spit cold if there was fans-in-booths
So my lines will burn Black like Ku Klux Klan-Recruits

He moves ahead-in-retreat, my punches'll put his head-in-defeat
Bitch you wouldn't be out-standing If you Begged-in-the-streets haha

I bet he'll spit-in-vain, got people seeing his shit-in-pain
I don't need to speak man, here - let this Pic-Explain


Expo
1st Bar - Sirius Black escaped the prison of Askaban
2nd Bar - He has an under strike (_) in the middle of his name
5th Bar - The pic has a stick man hanged, the same one in his avatar lol

The rest should be self explanatory

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/xplis ... 23573.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/topic23529.html

Had to do a quick edit because of the link

-- Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:49 am --

...Now Jayzon_Black, you're go...

I'll be the first to give you props on the pic, I laughed a bit but house rules state I can't flip it. Best of luck, lets get into it...


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p178967
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p179117



Light Red to the dome tho, a mutha fucka thinking pink
Dead as a dodo, link another sucka bitch extinct

Say he the finest, but Laura dog she the brink and peak
He neva find hits, neanderthal like the missing link

Reppin '88 but young enough to be my son dude
Check the profile, aint even old enough to cum dude

Ya bitch is a swine, so trust I'm buck and whore roping her
I'm switching designs you just a fuckin door opener

Besides, comparing me to this fuckin fifth grader
Is like placing iPads next to skytell pagers

Line3: Laura = Laura London, he says he's London's Finest
Line5: 88 from skylink
Line6: His profile says he's only 15
Line8: Skylink is a type of door opener, 88 is actually a model number, so he is literally named after a garage door opener

flow-skylink
multi-not many but id give it to skylink
word/name play-skylink
punches-both were ok but that burning black line made me give it to skylink
enjoyment i enjoyed both so tie in that one

overall skylink

hmmmm



I'm starting to question this fag, I swear this query/queer-y-is-whack
Anyone rarely hears-all-his-track, but he can't 'escape my bars' if he was 'Serious/Sirius-Black'
First note, drop the colors. I didnt get the pun deal with "query/him being a queer/gay. I also dont get what the dashes-are-used-for-really?
cuz the multis are too rough for me to consider a multi. The QUERY and SIRIUS BLACK was a multi. Punch was ok but ive heard too many "escape from my bars like Michale Scofield or Prison Break" but its still a punch.

I dont need to try cuz on the midst he put himself under strike (Jayzon _ Black
Bitch stretches his bars longer than skin of plumper dykes lol
wtf..?

You're lyin on falsehood, you can't stand-the-truth, you couldn't spit cold if there was fans-in-booths
So my lines will burn Black like Ku Klux Klan-Recruits
Best line you had, focus on this element/setup/punchline style in battles. This is what you should be doing

He moves ahead-in-retreat, my punches'll put his head-in-defeat
Bitch you wouldn't be out-standing If you Begged-in-the-streets haha
this was pretty cool

I bet he'll spit-in-vain, got people seeing his shit-in-pain
I don't need to speak man, here - let this Pic-Explain
eh..idk, SHIT IN PAIN? youre good with multis homie, use em. These just seemed like blah... how about like "Ill fuckin Rip his Frame then leave this Bitch In Pain...blah blah you stick figure Pic Explain"< id rather read multis like that then others... b/c the flow for "SHIT IN PAIN" sounds choppy and computerized.


was an aite verse, idk how many battles you done, i see you can write but your battling level can be elevated so just stay battlin if you wana get better.

-- Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:12 am --

Light Red to the dome tho, a mutha fucka thinking pink
Dead as a dodo, link another sucka bitch extinct
... Light Red to the dome tho? ..... ..wtf? wtf thinking pink what?
..and you really said "dead as a dodo".. ok next line


Say he the finest, but Laura dog she the brink and peak
He neva find hits, neanderthal like the missing link
Second line was aite, the setup was blah

Reppin '88 but young enough to be my son dude
Check the profile, aint even old enough to cum dude
...
Ya bitch is a swine, so trust I'm buck and whore roping her
I'm switching designs you just a fuckin door opener
Luckily you had expose'. I laughed

Besides, comparing me to this fuckin fifth grader
Is like placing iPads next to skytell pagers
..idk


Line3: Laura = Laura London, he says he's London's Finest
Line5: 88 from skylink
Line6: His profile says he's only 15
Line8: Skylink is a type of door opener, 88 is actually a model number, so he is literally named after a garage door opener




...i really think you could do better than this


VOTE=88sky. his verse was ok but was enough to be Jayzon. Both need to polish up but regardless, you both did ya thing, hold it down

Punches: 88
Flow: 88
Multies: 88
Enjoyment:88


Vote:88

88, you have a lot of potential. Jayzon, you do too but you have to spit harder in these match ups.

SkyLink wins, KO.

Only one record updated due to "testbattle", the winner.