Thu Hem -VS- Plague arsonist (P A wins KO)

[Thu Hem]

5Bars/ House Rule

Due After Check In.

Peace

[plague_arsonist]

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come at dude in his sleep with the heckler/
head shot make his dream widescreen like a fuckin projector

i beeging you not to make me run thru u thu let somebody take ya place/
your bars are the results of what would happen if keyboards could get drunk.... wasted space

see dude not gettin ima lyrical assassin verbal abuse leave ya mind torn/
and its clear by ya recod you not fucking seeing me....blind porn

this dude is a faggot at home but online he switches
my team put more red dots on him them indian bitches

u gave me ten lines dude it was sealed in five u let nikkas poke ya throat and i aint talking knives/
see he think its a game but i bet he's surpirsed turn off his xbox now he no longer Live

lol i didnt really care much for u dnt take it wrong lol expos none needed its all pretty simple well the keyboard line was basicly saying space bar blah blah u get it

[Alvin]

P A, you need better votes... the "oh he wins cuz i said so" shit doesnt fly, so please update your votes with better explanations.

[Thu Hem]

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Check Kid!

Laughing my ass off, as I’m sweeping this cat off his damn feet
Your gang quit you cos you wack in there midst, you cant bang bitch

Faggit, I’m anti-Bacteria if you’re plague, not to talk of your ineffective
Mah shit too corrective, mocking yo ass right infront of you not in directive

Alarm done blowing, this kid on the run like he’s stolen a cat fish
I aint tripping dwag, behind your Avatar you must be some ugly fat bitch

You’ll get squeeze than the office sheet, plaster ya face like you love stitch
I’m on the level your shit cant get to, even tho.. you fly jet you cant reach

Where’s your fucking flames at… since your called an Arsonist
You’ll get quench lyrically with two liters of Ragolis

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For The DumbAss Ragolis Is A Plastic Water...http://www.chagourygroup.com/industrial/ragolis-waters/

[Blake Downs]

come at dude in his sleep with the heckler/
head shot make his dream widescreen like a fuckin projector
(the flow was ightt-ish,punch was ok-ish)

i beeging you not to make me run thru u thu let somebody take ya place/
your bars are the results of what would happen if keyboards could get drunk.... wasted space
(multies was ok-ish, this bar read out loud made me feel stuid,and the punch was ightt)

see dude not gettin ima lyrical assassin verbal abuse leave ya mind torn/
and its clear by ya record you not fucking seeing me....blind porn
(man you got typos left and rite,but anyways the multis were ok,and the punch was ok)

this dude is a faggot at home but online he switches
my team put more red dots on him them indian bitches
(the flow was ok-ishh,and the punch was weak,definitley wasnt worded right)

u gave me ten lines dude it was sealed in five u let nikkas poke ya throat and i aint talking knives/
see he think its a game but i bet he's surpirsed turn off his xbox now he no longer Live
(the flow was weak-ish,the punch was okish)

vs

Laughing my ass off, as I’m sweeping this cat off his damn feet
Your gang quit you cos you wack in there midst, you cant bang bitch
(multies/flow was ok,personal attempt was ok-ish,punch wasnt too strong)

Faggit, I’m anti-Bacteria if you’re plague, not to talk of your ineffective
Mah shit too corrective, mocking yo ass right infront of you not in directive
(the flow was ok,the name play was ok-ishh,the punch was kinda weakishhh i thought)

Alarm done blowing, this kid on the run like he’s stolen a cat fish
I aint tripping dwag, behind your Avatar you must be some ugly fat bitch
(you both need to learn to type right lol,the multies were ok,the punch was weakkish)

You’ll get squeeze than the office sheet, plaster ya face like you love stitch
I’m on the level your shit cant get to, even tho.. you fly jet you cant reach
(this might have been the dumbest bar of the battle,the flow was a NO,no flow and the punch was the weakest)

Where’s your fucking flames at… since your called an Arsonist
You’ll get quench lyrically with two liters of Ragolis
(i wasnt feeling this really,the flow was ok-ish,nameplay attempt was weak,punch was weak-ish)

this battle was a bit weak,the first bar i might say was a tie both were weak-ish,then the next bar from thu hem i didnt really care for at all,plagues 2nd bar was better,and the rest of the battle continued like that,plague edged this battle just a little bit with more punches connecting,more multies,and overrall enjoyment
MVGT plague arsonist

[plague_arsonist]

panda understood man i sometimes dont really see a point cuz i find the one clearly outdoes the other but i understand will make sure my next votes are legit

[88SkyLink]

come at dude in his sleep with the heckler/
head shot make his dream widescreen like a fuckin projector

liked the second line though its universtal, not feeling the first line tbh, 3/5

i beeging you not to make me run thru u thu let somebody take ya place/
your bars are the results of what would happen if keyboards could get drunk.... wasted space

I understood what you were trying to say but I think this could've been worded better, 2/5

see dude not gettin ima lyrical assassin verbal abuse leave ya mind torn/
and its clear by ya recod you not fucking seeing me....blind porn

I liked the second line, but again its universal, get in with the personals 2/5

this dude is a faggot at home but online he switches
my team put more red dots on him them indian bitches

a pretty weak first line, I kinda laughed at the second line though lol, 3/5

u gave me ten lines dude it was sealed in five u let nikkas poke ya throat and i aint talking knives/
see he think its a game but i bet he's surpirsed turn off his xbox now he no longer Live

Gotta say a decent closer, the only one to have multis in em, again its all generic, a 3/5

13/25



Laughing my ass off, as I’m sweeping this cat off his damn feet
Your gang quit you cos you wack in there midst, you cant bang bitch

Weak lines, the rhyme was forced 1.5/5

Faggit, I’m anti-Bacteria if you’re plague, not to talk of your ineffective
Mah shit too corrective, mocking yo ass right infront of you not in directive

You had a crack @ his name which is a good concept, but it was worded weakly, plus the second were very forced, 2/5

Alarm done blowing, this kid on the run like he’s stolen a cat fish
I aint tripping dwag, behind your Avatar you must be some ugly fat bitch

stolen a cat fish? pretty weak simile. Not to sure about the fat bitch part, 1.5/5

You’ll get squeeze than the office sheet, plaster ya face like you love stitch
I’m on the level your shit cant get to, even tho.. you fly jet you cant reach

Seemed like a filler, the 'me me' rhymes don't help. forced rhymes in stitch/reach. 1/5

Where’s your fucking flames at… since your called an Arsonist
You’ll get quench lyrically with two liters of Ragolis

Get what you mean, but too universal. not a bad ending, but certainly not strong. 2/5

8/25

All in all a weak battle, but I think P_A got this. Yall keep on battling and there will be improvements, keep it up

MVGT - Plague_Arsonist

[Tha Dark Prince]

[quote=For The DumbAss] [/quote]

Lol

ok, look, this was one-sided, thu didn't land a decent punch, his schemes were sloppy n he evidently needs alot more practice, plague's shit was kinda weak too think he knows that, but better than thu's anyway.. So yeah

catsweep, MVGT: Plague arsonist

that should be k.o

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[Alvin]

Plague Arsonist wins KO