She said... "Why is your nose always buried in your notebook?" I said... If I spend, my entire day observing the world around me and fall asleep without writing it down then... I'm as good as dead.
And If tomorrow I wake up with arms as pens, a notepad fixed into my chest a place for words to compress and form like ideas in my flesh... Don't stress.
Baby... It's alright, sometimes somethings just change overnight.
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overnight.
POET OF THE YEAR 2011
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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Re: overnight.
Lets have babies. they'd be phenomenal artists.
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Re: overnight.
Lol <3
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POET OF THE YEAR 2011
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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Re: overnight.
dope, the shortness of this really gives way to the meaning behind the post its a good concept an well written even if a lil small.
lol at double.
jaz you better tap that bitch before she starts boning other guys.... booh yah
lol at double.
jaz you better tap that bitch before she starts boning other guys.... booh yah
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Re: overnight.
This is pretty damn creative, for as short as it is. I reallylike how the beginning of it is more like a question some of us might be asked every day, but how the middle completely transforms the though. Well done.
Re: overnight.
Love it.
Sounds like a kick ass day dream.
Vivid imagery.
Props.
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Re: overnight.
This was purtty dope. Thought it might be bunk because of the length, but you sure chose your words wisely.
Re: overnight.
Thank you sir.
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POET OF THE YEAR 2011
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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