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overnight.
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:06 am
by Borat
She said... "Why is your nose always buried in your notebook?" I said... If I spend, my entire day observing the world around me and fall asleep without writing it down then... I'm as good as dead.
And If tomorrow I wake up with arms as pens, a notepad fixed into my chest a place for words to compress and form like ideas in my flesh... Don't stress.
Baby... It's alright, sometimes somethings just change overnight.
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Re: overnight.
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:13 am
by Glamtrash
Lets have babies. they'd be phenomenal artists.
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Re: overnight.
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:16 am
by Borat
Lol <3
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Re: overnight.
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:56 am
by CBK
dope, the shortness of this really gives way to the meaning behind the post its a good concept an well written even if a lil small.
lol at double.
jaz you better tap that bitch before she starts boning other guys.... booh yah
Re: overnight.
Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 7:04 pm
by Kuhlerblynd
This is pretty damn creative, for as short as it is. I reallylike how the beginning of it is more like a question some of us might be asked every day, but how the middle completely transforms the though. Well done.
Re: overnight.
Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 7:32 am
by Dream
Love it.
Sounds like a kick ass day dream.
Vivid imagery.
Props.
Re: overnight.
Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:35 am
by Alvin
This was purtty dope. Thought it might be bunk because of the length, but you sure chose your words wisely.
Re: overnight.
Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 7:29 am
by Borat
Thank you sir.
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