keystyle-just sharpening the pen

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FatalX
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keystyle-just sharpening the pen

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I've come to EMBRACE DEATH with a SPIRIT of WRATH//
if REVENGE isn't SWEET,then these LYRICS are WACK//
you should PEER at the FACTS,what I'm WRITING is ILL//
it's like WATCHING-LIGHTNING STRIKE or TITANS FIGHTING to KILL//
^that^-INSIGHT was to SHIELD,against any OPPOSITION STANDING//
who CLAIM thier being REAL,but are QUESTIONABLE like LUNAR LANDINGS//
I call them "STARS".......-SEE everyones a CELEBRITY//
you wanna battle ME?-you need have some INTEGRITY//
MEASURE ME....."shit"-I can be a DICK too//
I guess the only difference is,I can make you GET LOOSE//
MISUSE--->......any WORD,PHRASE or TOPIC//
as I turn your WORDS around,like REFLECTIONS in a MIRRORS OPTICS//
FEAR and CAUTION-I bet you didnt HEAR your OPTIONS//
WATCH every STEP you take like you where NEAR where GOD was WATCHING//
I'm HASSLE-HOFFING,....in your life like CAMIOS//
fuck around and hit RECORD,BODYBAGS and PANNYHOSE//

keystyle....been awhile still working at it just trying to have a lil fun


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I CHANNEL all my ENERGY,
while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
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This shit was dope people weren't sleeping on it the site was temporary down I sure you'll be getting some feedback on this soon good drop!!
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not bad at all i like
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A nice drop my dude, I'm feeling the multi usage
your flow was on point throughout the whole thing to me
pretty good just for a keystyle..keep dropping my dude
your skill is still there
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i liked some of those one liner concepts, u dont sharpen pens tho, haha
stoned locomotion, im highly trained, flow fluid with pricy strains
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