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Deadline: Tuesday 10th January 2012
4 bars each

Emtu wrote:Deadline: Tuesday 10th January 2012
4 bars each

Drop when ur ready son.

PyDizZLE21 wrote:

Emtu wrote:Deadline: Tuesday 10th January 2012
4 bars each

Drop when ur ready son.

Wen i finish ima send my verse to the mods and they would post it here to avoid ppl feeding of my verse

P's drop will merk this, cuz my words speed off so Perfect...//
I'm sayin u'll be Boxed on church Shit, see u cant Feed off my Verse Bitch!...//
Leave Shocked on reverse Quick , bleed lots from my First hit...//
And reason why u Need Mods for the Verses, is cuz ur in-complete thoughts in ur Verse is.....Worthless!...//
I'm a Beast I'm..., hungry and its Feast Time, be deceased when I speak Rhymes...//
Feel the heat after each line, then I'll go to ur girl an spread her legs like the Peace Sign!...//
U'll be Boxed Below Dirt, and wht u Flow wont hurt, in fact theirs no Verse ...//
And I'll take this seriously when u actually have the Balls to Go First!...//

Watch me take down Pydizzle from LA with a mind sober watch me closely
But if you bring ya crew I defeat ya team like mav’s when I blow 3’s

This dude is like a solider talk about guns all day I TIE YOU LIKE LACE BOY
Son the only thing you pop sumn is the acne on ya face boy

Face the 10 toes when you face me defeat(d feet) like doomsday
Hit you with punchlines make pydizzle run away like Tyson now who’s gay?

You ain’t a rapper go on fb check out his rap swag like Bill and all Gates
Defeating Emtu? That’s the new mission impossible coming soon in all states

for a rookie battle this wasnt that bad really,alot of punchlines,u guys got sum work to do,but theres alot of potential here,i see alot of multi attempts and success,u gotta make sure ur multies are correct,some personals could be used more,wordplay as well,nameplay also,i think pydizzile edged this,it honestly wasnt a close decision,alot of emtus material just wasnt connecting for me,


(pydizzile21)
P's drop will merk this, cuz my words speed off so Perfect...//
I'm sayin u'll be Boxed on church Shit, see u cant Feed off my Verse Bitch!...//
(the multies were okayish,i didnt see this bar itself or the punch as strong or effective but not bad tho)

Leave Shocked on reverse Quick , bleed lots from my First hit...//
And reason why u Need Mods for the Verses, is cuz ur in-complete thoughts in ur Verse is.....Worthless!...//
(decentmulties,the flow is ight,this punch is better than ur 1stbar,ok personal)

I'm a Beast I'm..., hungry and its Feast Time, be deceased when I speak Rhymes...//
Feel the heat after each line, then I'll go to ur girl an spread her legs like the Peace Sign!...//
(the multies here are better,not bad there,the punch was kinda ight,kinda funny,)

U'll be Boxed Below Dirt, and wht u Flow wont hurt, in fact theirs no Verse ...//
And I'll take this seriously when u actually have the Balls to Go First!...//
(the multies here are ight,this bars the mostpersonal,the punch was okay-ishhhh)

vs
(Emtu)

Watch me take down Pydizzle from LA with a mind sober watch me closely
But if you bring ya crew I defeat ya team like mav’s when I blow 3’s
(flows there,multies were okish,the punch really didnt connect it actually made u look gay really)
(pydizzile definitley got the better first bar)

This dude is like a solider talk about guns all day I TIE YOU LIKE LACE BOY
Son the only thing you pop sumn is the acne on ya face boy
(almost below average flow,almost average multies,ur wording ruined it,so the punch was really weak)
(pydizzile had a better 2nd bar as well)

Face the 10 toes when you face me defeat(d feet) like doomsday
Hit you with punchlines make pydizzle run away like Tyson now who’s gay?
(the first bars concept is playedout,the gay reference is irrelevant,but the flow was ok,ok multie work)

You ain’t a rapper go on fb check out his rap swag like Bill and all Gates
Defeating Emtu? That’s the new mission impossible coming soon in all states
(lazy multi work,this was ur best punch and it wasnt really that great,not bad on the ending)

nice job ladies !
mvgt : pydizzile21

man i know you guys are new and i would love to give you some worthwhile feed but sorry im tired just would like to see you get some votes i know how slow it could be my vote goes to P simply based on flow cat structure wasnt much personals as to be expected punches were more in E favor but set ups ere weak P also took the multis and with the little personal attempt i did see goes to P so good 1st battle fellas be easy

Uppin for more votes.

I'm not going to base this battle on catagories as i would put most down as a tie, the lack of punches and personals really make this battle hard to judge as neither really had too many. (That's not a diss by the way, just the truth).

At the same time the multi's were pretty much on point, and both flowed well. The only thing edging this one for me is Aggression and INTENT to deliver a punch and diss the other.

So for that reason my vote goes to: PYDIZZLE

Both of you should keep working on it though, would be good to see you both battle each other again when you've elevated.

both of you need to post 2 links to battles that you voted on if there are no active battles ready for votes leave feed on 1 written and post the link.... 24 hrs to post link(s) or the thread will be locked until they are sent to me... thanks

this battle was aight...Emtu's bars had good structure...but for all the other categories he was lacking...

PyDizzle's bars had some strong personals and punches...more of a will to win...

I found the flow in P's more than Emtu's...so with that said...

MVGT=PyDizzle...

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Pydizzile

P's drop will merk this, cuz my words speed off so Perfect...//
I'm sayin u'll be Boxed on church Shit, see u cant Feed off my Verse Bitch!...//
Aight first bar.

Leave Shocked on reverse Quick , bleed lots from my First hit...//
And reason why u Need Mods for the Verses, is cuz ur in-complete thoughts in ur Verse is.....Worthless!...//
Ok.

I'm a Beast I'm..., hungry and its Feast Time, be deceased when I speak Rhymes...//
Feel the heat after each line, then I'll go to ur girl an spread her legs like the Peace Sign!...//
Played concept but an Ok spin on it.

U'll be Boxed Below Dirt, and wht u Flow wont hurt, in fact theirs no Verse ...//
And I'll take this seriously when u actually have the Balls to Go First!...//
Your best line. Decent personal/punch.

Emtu

Watch me take down Pydizzle from LA with a mind sober watch me closely
But if you bring ya crew I defeat ya team like mav’s when I blow 3’s
Not really feeling it.

This dude is like a solider talk about guns all day I TIE YOU LIKE LACE BOY
Son the only thing you pop sumn is the acne on ya face boy
Not really a fan of ending the line with the same word, punch/wordplay was there but its played and weak.

Face the 10 toes when you face me defeat(d feet) like doomsday
Hit you with punchlines make pydizzle run away like Tyson now who’s gay?
Defeat/D Feet is so so played, weak punch too.

You ain’t a rapper go on fb check out his rap swag like Bill and all Gates
Defeating Emtu? That’s the new mission impossible coming soon in all states
Filler really.

Punchlines: Pydizzile
Wordplay: Emtu for his attempts.
Personals: Pydizzile
Flow: Emtu
Multi's: Tie
Humour: Pydizzile

Good attempt from both, but Pydizzile edges this one for me. Keep battling and evevating and your both get there.

Vote - Pydizzile

yep p wins 4-0 KO closed and updated