[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=21a6wFuV-rM[/video]
they're just some bars i wrote in class that i did on camera after school
Let me know what you think of the lyrics
After School Freeverse Video
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Re: After School Freeverse Video
shit was good i thought man, you def on the right track on starting off. good rhyme schemes and a good flow. keep workin on that and youre gona have some ill shit in the future
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Hmmm. This is alright. You're rhymescheme is pretty cool man ... I enjoyed it ... and it's interesting to hear someone off a beat ... God ... it's been years since I've tried to do that ... Damn, you really laid down some bars here. I'm with the dude above me ... Keep that shit up!
Re: After School Freeverse Video
thanks for the feedback and if you can checkout one of my actual recorded songs http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UXn4guMHC0Q
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its not really that hard to spit acapella dudeCyan wrote:Hmmm. This is alright. You're rhymescheme is pretty cool man ... I enjoyed it ... and it's interesting to hear someone off a beat ... God ... it's been years since I've tried to do that ... Damn, you really laid down some bars here. I'm with the dude above me ... Keep that shit up!
this was nice i watched this when u first posted it but didn't leave feed... this was pretty good man... i think i remember you from IL way back in the day... ur name looks familiar... anyways keep droppin man
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Re: After School Freeverse Video
yeah ive been dropping tracks off and on for like 2-3 years under different profiles cause i forget my passwords cause i dont log in for so long
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