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Tears On Her Pillow sick track

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This is a collab i did with Lil $am (http://www.reverbnation.com/lilsam11234#) and Droll

i dont know how to embed this http://www.divshare.com/download/16615967-fbe

verse order, Sam, Droll, Me
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okay beat is pretty good..

first guy ..deliv and emotions pretty good..good quality too..lycs are aight..

Second guy..scheme is a lil different its coo..the lyrics are pretty good..hmm ..he aight..not as good as the first guy..

3rd verse..i like the quality and lyrics..the rhyme scheme nice bro..
esp in the first 8 bars or ..presence is decent could be better tho..
i thought the speedy flo came off almost completely on point..
actually the presence gets better on the qwik flo..

oh yeah the hook is actually pretty dope..


id say all in all the songs pretty good....good to hear what you sound like bro....keep doin ya thing..1
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thanks man im glad you like it

-- Fri Jan 20, 2012 11:13 pm --

i just realized that my verse actually got dragged slightly to the left when i was mixing, so if it sounds off time its not me i just fixed it on my computer
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Ayo if you got a Mic you should join our audio league http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/illes ... -f263.html

-- Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:46 am --

Ayo if you got a Mic you should join our audio league http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/illes ... -f263.html
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your good rek keep doing it
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