Freestyle

[PeyotePearl]

So here's a freestyle that I did. Feedback is appreciated as always. Also at the end is a link to the audio.
Takin me where I gotta go oh no this if or real a show
Got me in it and ready to flow got me rollin dough
Rollin fittys up like a bouss it’s easy as tryna’ floss
I’m not, what you think I am there’s more to it it’s like bam
Slam, dunk this ball it’s like this bitches
Show you more it’s like making sandwiches
Pb and j no I need that honey
Sweetie will you be my honey?
Shit I’ve got the money
Yeah be my honey bunny
Weather’s pretty sunny
I’m flyin’ high up in the sky got me runnin wild
You can’t tame me shame me? Shit don’t blame me!
Got me higher than spiderman up on a wall
Not scared of fallin’ and I’m ballin’
Ready for the impact bitch? Yous about to get smacked
Hit upside down with a baseball bat
Rollin’ up in a lamborghini so fresh like pesto tortellini
You’re callin’ me a big meanie? Well you’re the weenie
Damn son you think you fine?
Well you just crossed that line
Now back off we gon’ have a heart to heart chat and I’ma take off
Haha I’mma scoff
I’m chiller than an ice cube in an iced tea
And you think you can beat me?
Look who’s talkin’ the talk look who’s walkin the walk
It’s me BITCH and I’ve got reason
I’mma boss and you’re just moss
Growin’ on a rock
How many times you been stepped on bitch?
Shit, you’re a bitch with a glitch you’re not rhymin’ right
Skippin like a CD not so tight
I’m on a flight to China now, you want me to bring back your Buddha so you can sleep sound?
I’m your worst nightmare you’ve got a flow goin that no one can hear
Your biggest fear has already come true
I used to be a nobody just like you
But hell, that’s changed got me rearranged and I’m ready for the fame
Bring it on I’m back now I’mma keep rhyming while you go take a nap
I said I was chill and I meant cold as FUCK
So cold you’ll get frostbite just from bein’ near my touch
You wanna play it rough like rugby? Oh damn you just spat fire and that was a first
One line out of a hundred line verse hahaha
I’m spittin’ and bitchin’ I’m so cold I’m hot
Burn to the touch yeah can you feel it like such?
I know this is just a bit much, for you to handle
I can ride my bike with no handlebars, no handlebars
And you need both hands, aren’t my rhymes just so fuckin’ grand?
You can do a headstand? Good for fuckin you
That’s gonna get you nowhere and that’s the truth
I could rhyme forever and I’ve got a reason to
Im makin’ a name for myself how bout you?
I’m over and out if you want your name heard you better shout out

http://soundcloud.com/peyotepearl/freestyle

[cyanidesyn]

1st plz tell me ur a female cuz if u aint u sound like 1 if this is a freestyle this aint bad if its written u need sum work i mean rappers write sumthin on an iphone n call it a freestyle nowadays so thats wat i was gettin at i dnt mean any disrespect by anything i said keep doin u cuz u only get better wit time n practice

[PeyotePearl]

Haha yeah I am a female and yes it was a freestyle.

[cyanidesyn]

then yea that shit was nice i dnt c alot of femcees or in that case actually hear them go in other then tha bs female artists out now (nicki minaj voice is annoying) like i said u can only progress wit practice n time hope 2 hear more from u

[PeyotePearl]

Thanks and yeah for sure bro.