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[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/peyotepearl/iller-than-the-illest[/soundcloud]

Sounds very amateur, like you used a USB headset and recorded both the beat and vocals together. What are you using to record? (program, mic, etc) Lyrics were alright, but I'd focus more on your delivery. The timing was off in some places and the vocals were very monotone. Loosen up, relax and put some soul/emotion into the delivery. You're making music, not recording lectures. I bet with some practice (and decent equipment) you would sound pretty nice.